Falcons Dancing Among Eagles

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Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

0 posted 2002-01-16 01:00 AM

Carry my message
~~~near and far
O', Nation of My Heart.

Speak with unknown tongues
of spirit and of fire.
Say to the mountains,

"I will rise above you. I am
a conqueror.I am an Eagle."

Hear the flutter
of myriads of wings
as Falcons dance
among Eagles' wings, soaring
to the mountain tops,
catching the winds of the Spirit.

Carry my message
near and far~~~
scale the mountains,
soar past its peaks,

your new-found wings
~~~~~~beating
to the rhythms of the Sun.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2002-01-16 01:05 AM

BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!!Stunning!!!!!!!!You knew I would love this one and I do!!! Ivy, This one is truly a masterpiece...do you ever write anything that isn't

**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

2 posted 2002-01-16 08:56 AM

This is a beautiful poem. A work of art.
alan

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-01-16 08:59 AM

BRAVO!!! YAY!!! OH MY GOSH, THIS IS SOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL, SWEET FRIEND, YOUR LOVING HEART REFLECTS THE SUNLIGHT UPON THE WINGS OF THE EAGLE, WEATHERING EACH MOUNTAIN WITH GRACE AND LOVE!!! (big hugggssssss) I love it, sweet friend, you truly are our Poetess Of Lovely Visions! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

4 posted 2002-01-16 11:44 AM

Wonderful, beautiful poem Ivy Rose, I so enjoyed reading it. floria

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2002-01-16 01:07 PM

Oh, I truly enjoyed this one, Ivy, I have a friend I'm going to send it to.

This is inspiring!!!!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

6 posted 2002-01-16 01:14 PM

loved it..fantastic..a truly patriotic feel to this one..

~Vic

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2002-01-19 02:40 PM

So here's the plan. First write great poems, give them catchy titles, watch Sunshine fall in like with your work...and whoosh...you stay on top.

Thank you!

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

8 posted 2002-01-19 02:52 PM

There is a patriotic feel to this and guess that the falcons must be those smaller competitors that harass the majestic eagle (American) in its flight.So if there is that
symbolism there it is interesting the way you've expressed it.

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