Open Poetry #18 |
I Wait (tanka) |
rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
I Wait I wait here for you Life’s haze settling around Me like a soft dream Waiting to feel your whisper And to listen to your soul. "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (01-15-2002 06:32 PM).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Sounds like it's worth waiting for! God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may the love of your life come to you and give you all your heart desires and make you happy! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
He will be there one day for you, and also for the rest of your life. I liked your tanka! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Soft and lovely. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Sweet and lovely. floria |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Wow! Thanks for the quick replies. I'm glad you all enjoyed. The one I'm waiting for is already there. It's sometimes I miss him like crazy. Thanks for stopping in to read "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
one day? i'm here now!! honey, you capture snapshots of your heart with these. amazing. of course, i'm biased. but still. and yes, dear, i love you right back -Dave |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* a tender waiting that gets rewarded for her patience..*grin* very well done....I am so glad to see him embrace you...*giggling* you two are just too cute..I LOVE THAT YOU ARE IN LOVE. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tara~ This is lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Very pretty! Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Girl, you wear love so well! - and you've certaintly mastered the tanka. This is delicately pretty~ Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Tara, no one should keep you waiting This is very romantic, expectant emotive verse. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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