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A Velvet Gloved Breeze
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A Velvet Gloved Breeze |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Crimson roses drip with velvet passion petals drip over a chantilly moon the shadow of a distant memory like an unreachable hot balloon ruby lipstick entices the shadows eerie violins echo within naked trees passionate wings of desperate moonlight seduced slowly,by a velvet gloved breeze a rapturous voice within sheets of night dwells within driftwood of the seas haunting shores sigh with grains of pleasure like the final breath of a helpless leaf falling like a lost penney to the ground rejoicing in a smokey sienna gown You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. -Ziggy [This message has been edited by Victoria (01-15-2002 05:03 PM).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
You, my dear, are hereby crowned the queen of imagery! Long may you reign!!! Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, your truly are our Queen Of Imagery! (kiss on cheek) This is soooo gorgeous, sweet friend, your lips breathe the essence and colors of the breeze so magically! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
what a pretty sonnet. Very vivid images and a fun read. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
~~sigh~~ I do love this, and its not just because I'm having poetry withdrawal either.  |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Your words are so very expressive Victoria. lovely poem. floria |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
kathleen...you are too kind hon..hugss thank you for those sweet comments noah..i could have never witten poetry like you do when i was your age..i can only imagine what you will be like when you have become a mature and i mean very mature haa..man..with the gray steaks in your hair and the litle laugh lines around your eyes...keep writing hon... Canuckster...thank you very much..glad you enjoyed  Temptress..i usually dont look in the other forums but i know i havent seen you in this one ha..hurry back..what are you waiting for? floria..thank you so much and thank you for peeking in ..always nice to hear from you hugs |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
To She, who wears velvet like a glove: Thy words drip of passion, colours, ruby red. Echoing their lovely tune, to drift me oft in bed. Thank You, for such lovely words to read, Lady Ollyne |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you dear Lady Ollyne..I love having your words grace the moonlight canvas of passions. ~Victoria You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Victoria - you do write well, just lovely. I like and enjoy reading your work... BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Vic...your poems are always such a pleasure to read...so visual...I love your imagry... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you bill..so nice of you to say..makes me feel good when i get those kind of compliments..  Magnus..thank you..May i call you Barry since everyone else is?.. ha..   |
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