Open Poetry #18 |
Why Do I Love You, Why Do I Care? |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I know....I know you do...you know that. Yes, I will...always..you know that too. Why?A thousand reasons if not more. I cannot, in this lifetime..express them all. Love...certainly...but it goes even deeper. Hard to explain...just a feeling I have. I will sing a song to you...that is how.. For I love you enough to do just that. Let me tell you that I love you.. Let me show you how much I will. Let me give to you this heart true till the rivers are dry and time is still. Let me take you, forever hold you. Give you comfort and much joy. Let me want you, ever need you for I desire to, is not just a ploy. Can you love me, ever give me all the feelings which are inside? Will you take me and hold me? Hold me close and never hide. Are you always, always for me? Will you stand beside me today?. Does it happen, happen freely? Will our love always be this way? I can tell you countless times that I care so deeply for you. I can write romantic rhymes and they all will be so true. For I need and always want to tell you over and over again. That I dearly do desire you and your heart I carry within.. [This message has been edited by Magnus (01-15-2002 05:18 PM).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Sometimes it is hard to tell someone how much they mean to you..or they just dont get it haa...lovely Magnus.. ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy this is utterly wonderful, I love the way you have of revealing your whole heart. I can really feel the love you have spilling out in an ocean of wonder. Isn’t love fabulous? You know I love this don't you? Good I do utterly fabulous work Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
Very creative. The first part almost sounds like listening in on one half of a phone conversation. Very touching and sincere senitments well expressed. |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Mr. "M": Absolutely beautiful. Look behind you - she is standing there. (If not, call me!) Your words are so soft and tender. All I can say is WOW! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Magnus, You have expressed your love so very beautifully. floria |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, pick me up off of the floor and fan me with your charms!!!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Yes, you can write so romantically and tell her how mcuh she loves you all the time, and she will always respond with a warm happy smile and will be so happy to love you forever! (smiles) She will always love you, sweet friend, for you have a very loving heart and she desires you all the same! This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you always write so beautifully! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is tender, like being privy to a conversation between two people...very nicely done. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Victoria...yes, you are right. Sometime you have to walk an extra mile to get the point home...well....I wore my shoes out on this one... Thanx.. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Deeply romantic! Well done! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh Mushy, you write such utterly wonderful words...Thank You... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mushy...I tried to comment...got lost somewhere. Thanx young lady...you always have such utterly wonderful thoughts... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Canukster...yes, I sometimes like to let a poem flow like inner thoughts or one sided conversation...can say a lot that way...and seems very personal...and it is.. |
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