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Nightshade

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0 posted 2002-01-17 08:28 PM

   Just before
   the man in the moon
   tipped his hat
   and bid the yawning stars
   a fond farewell,
   Just before
   the incessant sun
   stretched and made it's
   grandiose entrance
   with a radiant hello,
   You kissed me
   and the difference
   between night and day
   became
   insignificant.

                               Chris - Jan.2002

strbbux
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1 posted 2002-01-17 08:30 PM

Oh Chris this is sooooooooo nice. floria

brianbeaudry
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2 posted 2002-01-17 08:30 PM

WOW!!!!!!You have just voices so much in so few words!!!Amazing post dear friend!!!

Nightshade

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3 posted 2002-01-17 08:37 PM

Thankyou Floria and Brian for reading and for your kind responses. My muse has been on holiday, and I was nervous to post - it has been a long time. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

gladiator
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4 posted 2002-01-17 08:52 PM

Hi Nightshade..
this is another of your beautiful words..the kiss is such a meaningful part of romance..beautiful write..

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2002-01-17 08:53 PM

Sounds like a kiss to your liking...James

Alicat
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6 posted 2002-01-17 08:54 PM

This was very sweet. Thank you for granting a smile.

Alicat

Nightshade

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7 posted 2002-01-17 09:00 PM

gladiator - Yes, the kiss is very under rated anymore I think...and yes, it is very meaningful. thanks for your comments.

JamesMichael - Yes it was.

Alicat - Thankyou, and you are welcome to a smile anytime.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2002-01-17 09:08 PM

Nightshade - and if I kissed you under the Haunting Moon, you would have known neither day or night... A very touching write, as you can tell...

BC

Nightshade

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9 posted 2002-01-17 09:12 PM

Bill - oh my, I am blushing....is there a Haunting Moon out to-night? Thankyou for your sweet reply to my offering. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Mistletoe Angel

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10 posted 2002-01-17 09:19 PM

(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet Chris, this is such a beautiful kiss of true love! (smiles) May you forever feel the beauty of true love day and night with the love of your life! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Nightshade

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11 posted 2002-01-17 09:27 PM

Aww sweet Noah, thankyou and I wish the same for you, thanks for reading. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Victoria

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12 posted 2002-01-17 09:40 PM

I like this very much...yes when you close your eyes and kissed by the one you love..it doesnt matter the time of day...enjoyed

~Vic

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

Irish Rose
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13 posted 2002-01-17 09:41 PM

OH, Chris, so GOOD to see you
and read your words, I could
read all day about kisses

love it!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Nightshade

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14 posted 2002-01-17 09:42 PM

Victoria, Yes, that's right...time just doesn't matter. Thankyou. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Nightshade

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15 posted 2002-01-17 09:44 PM

Kay, thankyou for reading my little ditty and taking the time to comment. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Tracey
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16 posted 2002-01-17 09:46 PM

Ah, now there’s a kiss!! Aren't kisses wonderful? I can feel the magic in this one

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Nightshade

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17 posted 2002-01-17 10:10 PM

Tracey - a kiss is a magical thing. Thanks for signing. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

18 posted 2002-01-17 10:19 PM

Hey Chris!! Must be getting close to Valentine's Day again! Ooooh love those kisses, don't we? Excellent write! You just KNOW I love this one, and you!
Hugs, Teed.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

[This message has been edited by Enchantress (01-17-2002 10:26 PM).]

Nightshade

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19 posted 2002-01-17 10:25 PM

NancyLee - Yes, we love candy kisses, butterfly kisses..etc. etc. I am glad you liked this one. Hugs, Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Balladeer

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20 posted 2002-01-17 10:27 PM

It would take me more words in my reply than you used in your poem to tell you how impressive this is. The imagery based on your choice of wording is awesome and it leaves the reader with a nice warm feeling at the end...I like it!!

Nightshade

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21 posted 2002-01-17 10:29 PM

Balladeer, How kind of you. Your comments have made my night. Thankyou. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

The Rusty Knight
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22 posted 2002-01-17 11:09 PM

WOW talk about making a fellas day. Paint a Mona Lisa and deliver it to him with a smile....Tell a fella this and he would take out the trash was the dishes, fold the clothes, cut the grass, and wash the windows all before he drove the kids to school.

Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Lady Ollyne
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23 posted 2002-01-17 11:40 PM

"You kissed me
and the difference
between night and day
became
insignificant."

Wonderful...
These words,
are the truth within
mine heart..if only one
can believe it to be so.

Lady Ollyne

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

[This message has been edited by Lady Ollyne (01-17-2002 11:41 PM).]

Honeybee
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24 posted 2002-01-17 11:51 PM

I love this! Wonderfully said!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

ctowen
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25 posted 2002-01-17 11:58 PM

Anybody know what time it is?
I got a little lost there for a moment,
lost my bearings.
I think I regained control but another kiss like that I maybe lost forever.

Ivy Rose
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26 posted 2002-01-18 12:15 PM

What a gem of a poem this is!!!! Simple; yet stunning none-the-less. ***Ivy Rose

arthur
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27 posted 2002-01-18 07:15 AM

thank you
arthur

walker
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28 posted 2002-01-18 07:25 AM

I love it.

dgvarner
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29 posted 2002-01-18 07:27 AM

funny how a kiss can send the rest of the world into oblivion eh..

love this

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

[he] comes to me when i'm feelin' down..inspires me without a sound..[he] touches me... -b joel

Janet Marie
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30 posted 2002-01-18 07:54 AM

and bid the yawning stars
   a fond farewell,
   Just before
   the incessant sun
   stretched and made it's
   grandiose entrance
   with a radiant hello,
======================================

So youre telling us this kiss was so good that it turned off the night...and rose the sun??? LOL....Whew!! musta been some kiss...
Works for me....and by this clever cool poem...me thinks it worked for you

Turn off the night...turn on the poet

SO good to see you writing again ...and being well inspired *L*
that perfect last line says it all.
well done Poetess Chris

jm

It's not like you to say sorry
I was waiting on a different story
This time I'm mistaken ...
for handing you a heart worth breakin'

~nickleback~

Nightshade

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31 posted 2002-01-18 09:20 AM

Dan - All of that for just one kiss? Wait...have to find my list and my chapstick. Thankyou.

Lady Ollyne - I believe, yes, I believe. Thankyou for your response.

Melissa - Thankyou for stopping by.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Nightshade

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32 posted 2002-01-18 09:32 AM

ctowen - Ahh, to be lost in a kiss. Thankyou

Ivy Rose - Thankyou so much.

aruthur - Sweet one, you're welcome and thankyou.

walker - I'm so glad you do! Thankyou

dgvarner - yes, I agree. Glad you dropped in.

Janet Marie - Oh, my goodness. Your warm words have touched my heart and my muse hangs her tossled head in shame for being away so long. Thankyou.

The way I am feeling this morning...Toto..I don't think we are in Kansas anymore!!! Thankyou All !!

paladin

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33 posted 2002-01-18 10:08 AM

A kiss can make time and space disappear as we are transported into that special demension called love.

paladin

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Deep in the heart

34 posted 2002-01-18 10:09 AM

WHOA!
BRAVA!
This is magnificent!
I wish I had written this

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Greeneyes

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35 posted 2002-01-18 11:33 AM

and wow what a difference...I loved this, the feeling....and tender emotion...

Lauren~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-18-2002 11:34 AM).]

Startime
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36 posted 2002-01-18 11:39 AM

*sigh* Beautiful....the power of a single kiss...isn't it simply amazing. I love this poem..it is just perfect. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Nightshade

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37 posted 2002-01-18 12:39 PM

paladin - How right you are. Thankyou.

Interloper- I was hoping to hear from you. Thanks again for your words of advice.

Greeneyes - I am so glad you enjoyed. Thanks

Startime - Thankyou and hugs back at ya.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Magnus

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38 posted 2002-01-18 02:30 PM

Nightshade...

Wow...this is a sensual write of a feeling
that all enjoy....Love...started with a
soft yet passionate kiss... Very well
expressed in your words...You deserve to
feel that warmth...that moment...

thank you for sharing this with me..

Nightshade

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39 posted 2002-01-18 03:10 PM

Magnus - Thankyou so much for reading and taking the time to comment. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

catalinamoon

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40 posted 2002-01-30 10:56 PM

Hi Chris, I wonder how I missed this gem of poetry before? Well no matter, cause I found it! Absolutely captivating.
Sandra

ecrivan
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41 posted 2002-01-30 11:11 PM

wonderfully done

twinkyfl1
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42 posted 2006-12-16 10:16 PM

So much said, in so few words. You are one classy lady.

I think I love you!

To thy own self be true

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