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Passion's Flame
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Passion's Flame |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Passion's Flame I am hot with wants desires burning though me lighting blood setting me aflame filling veins with love setting my heart on fire as I dream of your arms pulling me into your chest kissing my lips with passion softly whispering your love lighting of passion's flame saying with gentleness I Love You Karen Torbiak© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Karen Very unique and it certainly gets your message across each line. HOT STUFF!!!! Enjoyed. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karen, How hot is that? Wow! Love the presentation and the poem. I am so impressed.  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Um, ah, has anyone checked the thermostat in here lately? Wow! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is absolutely FANTASTIC, Karen... Have you fallen in love with a fireman?  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* thanks everyone...I'm not in love with anyone but I am in love with love...*sigh* *wicked grin* Maybe the flame from a star scares them off...**hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Wow. Someone is definitely setting this New Year ablaze.   Nicely done.Dave |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well look at this! I know how hard these are to do, and you make it look so doggone easy, AS WELL AS making a great poem! Showoff! LOL...  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karen! You are for sure a woman with many talents  This is very hot and yet so well presented....LOVE IT!!! Hugs. ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ [This message has been edited by Enchantress (01-02-2002 03:34 PM).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
The flame of romance..oh yessssss ... ya did good girl..nicely done karen.. ~Victoria~ "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow. You did this really well, beautiful, with such hot words! Sandra |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Startime , how unique this is, a poet and an artist. great work. floria |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Startime...You certainly know how to start a fire!!!!! WOW!!! This is passionate. ***Ivy Rose |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
HOLY SMOKE I love this startime! It is sooo different than anything I've seen. How did u do that? sizzling darling! RP [This message has been edited by RosePetal (01-02-2002 08:16 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
SIZZZZZZZLE.... Karen...YOU can't tell me you didn't eat oysters before you wrote this...I won't believe you... Ouch....burned my fingers when I touched the keyboard....HOT HOT HOT...nice flames... I am envious of how you can do this... |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
So well written and organized. Much talent went into this. Such passion. Thank you for sharing this work of art. Roger |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karen, Scares them off? Yeah...right. NOT!! You just gotta wait for the right one. 'Cause the wrong one ain't worth it. Trust me...I know! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Now this is how it should be!! Nicely done, Karen. All writing comes |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Karen I thought this was stunning and full of heat. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
land sakes alive, I almost fell over at these colors, how in the world did you do that? This is neat |
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Virgo_Rains Member
since 2001-12-03
Posts 54Pacific Northwest, U.S.A. |
This is so so cool...very talented! VR |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Karen~ I love when you write Passion....this is excellent, love the design as well..... Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day |
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