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Open Poetry #18

When It Was Time

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2002-01-15 11:22 AM

When the weather changes
Into dust or wind,
Where one loses It IS mind,
When the time
would tells us
How life leads to?
And where love Is?
When It was time
It was time
for us to know why?
When we had been so much
Through out the time
Never knew how and why
one could carry on It easily,
When the time changed us
Into It's way,
When It was time
the time
who could tell us
how love would be taken
the time away
With It's days
to shine upon,
When It was time,
Time to tell us
Where love was,
The love was here everytime
when we didn't know too,
When It was time

[This message has been edited by vandana (01-15-2002 11:25 AM).]

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2002-01-15 12:13 PM

The love was here everytime
when we didn't know too,
When It was time

These words hit me hard...do we really know when It was time? Well said. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-15 12:17 PM

(smiles) Sooooooo wonderfull said, sweet friend, time is always such a mysterious feeling with love, but love is always destined to suprise us and will befriend with time to give us happiness forever! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is fabulpus! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

emily
Member

since 2000-10-03

Posts 142
USA

3 posted 2002-01-15 01:13 PM

this is a nice poem, thoughts that I hadn't dwelling on for some time.

Emily

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2002-01-15 01:18 PM

When it is time, how will I know
I'll let the light of love flow slow.

I love what you did with the words of such a simple phrase.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

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