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When I'm In You My 4000 post
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When I'm In You My 4000 post |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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~ When I’m In You ~ When you are lying there just before you close your eyes Reach out with your thoughts and feel me in your sighs Every breath you take carries me deep into you Feel me there within, as my spirit flows on through You will feel my touch, as I travel through your heart? Know that with me like this we’ll never be kept apart My spirit tingles through your body feel me lift your soul Hold me to you darling let me make you completely whole When the night calls you to dreamland and you have to go Feel me inside you, as I make your blood ebb and flow It’s my spirit within you that calls up this passion’s tide With me within your soul you have nowhere left to hide I’m the need that consumes you in the heat of night Washing your soul and making you long for daylight Within the night bejewelled by stars my powers are best At daybreak although still there a burning need its rest When you lay yourself down to dream through the night Call forth my essence to captivate and summon delight When my spirit is swirling through you bringing desire Imagine my touch flooding over your skin like liquid fire With each breath you take you’ll find I’m deeper in you I’m in your blood your breath your heart all ways through I’m the dream you dream I’m each thought complete When the night calls you feel the touch of my heartbeat Marsha To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 [This message has been edited by Marsha (01-15-2002 10:22 AM).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is very, very passionate, Marsha, rest those fingers dear  It is good to read someone who is sounding so happy and fulfilled.  Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah look at this! Who would have thought just a few months ago, you would come tripping into Passions and blowing bubbles all over us. Your Phoenix rose, your fire was lit, you've combined your poetry with some awesome wit.... and I am very proud to know you.... Hugs and Congratulations on this, your 4000th post... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, Your fashion lives up to your passion. Wonderful write. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 YAY!!! I LOVE IT!!! STANDING OVATION!!! BEAUTIFULLY BREATHTAKING, SWEET FRIEND, THIS IS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL POEM TO RING IN 4000!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) I LOVE IT, SWEET FRIEND, BRAVO!!! (kiss on cheek) May true love forever fill your heart, sweet friend, we are all so happy for you! We all love you so much, sweet friend, here's to thousands more gorgeous poem from your loving heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-15-2002 10:56 AM).] |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
This piece is just simply breathtaking. A wonderful and sweet write. Congratulations on reaching 4,000 posts! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Wow, this is SOME week for you, Marsha... Falling in love, your birthday and your 4000 post all rolled into one! Congratulations on all and by the way......your poem is absolutely beautiful and just glows with passion!  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!!Sensual passion just pours out of these words...BRAVO!!!!This poem is a masterpiece painting your inner heart's desires...I LOVE IT.!!  **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Marsha,a beautiful poem over flowing with love.   Love,  Juanita |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Congrats on your 4000th post! I can't wait to see another 4000 from you dear marsha! This was so gorgeous. RP |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Mushy one, you've outdone yourself with this one. CONGRATULATIONS on the 4000th post. Now you can rest on your laurels...or something and give me a chance to grasp your soaring wings. Don't fly too far beyond me love. Absolutely superb! Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW Marsha!!! This is soooo beautiful!! You sound so in love!! A magnificent piece for your 4000th post!! Congratulations Mushy Girl!!! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kathleen darling girl thank you so very very much YES darling girl this poem is special, and now I’ll lay myself back down and let my fingers do the talking That is what you meant wasn’t it?    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling sister of my soul well who’d have thought it indeed, I only came back because you said you missed me darling girl. I wasn’t meaning to stay long, but there’s something about the warmth here now that wraps itself around your heart and you don’t want to stray. YOU however always had faith in me, thank you darling sister of mine. Of course you only want me here because YOU always look good standing next to me Well, if you will be wittier prettier and sweeter what do you expect. Naturally you’ll be the one looking pure and innocent and I’ll be the one looking like I’m not. Big smile Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy thank you so very much, I must say that I definitely am happy and I think perhaps it shows. Passion certainly slips through whether I mean it too or not You are always so sweet to me thank you for always being such a faithful reader of my writing. YOU are special you know Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
flaming love. . . totally full of fire. . . great job. . . congratulations. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
A beautiful and passionate write, Marsha...congratulations on that 4000! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marsha - congratulations on the 4000th. After doing all of these numbers I don't think I will ever be able to count that high again. But this is most elegant, only as you can do. It has everything said that can be said. Congratulations also, with this writing... BC |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Noah darling boy thank you so very much, Thank you so very very much. I did enjoy writing this poem, sometimes it’s easier than others and lately I’ve had more reason to write passion or so it seems You are always so sweet to me, I thank you for always being there ready to read and send me warm love and smiles. YOU are special you know Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Randy darling boy thank you so very very much I don’t deserve such wonderful praise but I thank you for it. I do believe my writing has changed a little over the last few months, which is just as well it could certainly do with a lot of improving. If this is better I’m glad it means I am getting somewhere Thank you again Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Lyra darling girl thank you so much YOU are a great inspiration to me you know. YOU and Juanita are both such vibrant and vital souls who always write with utter delight. Whether you are making me cry or laugh you reveal such insight in your writing that I’m awed Thank you for being you my dearest friend. Big smile Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 [This message has been edited by Marsha (01-16-2002 10:15 AM).] |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Beautiful and sweet,like only you can do! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Marsha CONGRATULATIONS WOW 4000. this is beautiful as are all your poems. floria |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Congratulations, Marsha! Wow! 4000! And just look at all of the friends you have made! You, dear Marsha are very special! God bless you. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
MMMMMMMMMM dont I just know these feelings sweet sis of mine...Brava dear one on 4000!!!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaLove~ See ... that IS your name ~ AND I love you my dear darling girl~ Congratulations on the big numbers~ You're quite a number yourself ! ! Now ... how's about some more Mush~~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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poetryinmotion Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 61mass |
congrats on making 4000. great job. your poem is just wonderful. great reading. very nice work. love Alice |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Karen darling girl thank you so very much, I’m always amazed and delighted by your writing. You are a delight to read and have as a friend thank you so much. As long as I can read you I’ll be here Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Juanita darling girl and one of my dearest friends YOU really are shining and it’s wonderful to see. YOU know how much I love your writing, love you, and as for your Stevie, mmmm mmm mm. What a clever mummy you were to make such a wonderful talented package. It’s a good job you know I’m only playing And that just goes to show what a fabulous friend you are you even let me play with your favourite son. I knew that Passions would be a perfect home for us all, and WE all love you darling girl but I love you more Big smile THANK YOU Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
RP darling girl thank you so very very much. YOU are always a delight to read and I always look for your writing. Thank you muchly for your shining light Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is awesome! Mushy, mushy magnificent, magical, magnetic. Marsha, this is so cool. "When my spirit is swirling through you bringing desire Imagine my touch flooding over your skin like liquid fire" Wish I had written that! |
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