Open Poetry #18 |
The Mind Debates |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
The Mind Debates Sent into confusion The mind in a spin Disorder and chaos Somedays I can’t win It happens too often Make no mistake Causing such turmoil Sometimes heartbreak Unfounded suspicion Fear and paranoid Falling into the traps Some I should avoid Those baffling twists Games without clues Amongst grey matter Some confusing issues To remain on a level In tracking the mind The centre of being Some balance I find Hope © 2002 |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Boy, oh boy! I could relate to this well! My mind is always going nonstop...sigh... This was great, a very observant and insightful read! Well done! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hey thanks for your thoughtful reply Mor , yes I find I have an over active mind , thats why when activated so many thoughts are often debated Hope |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Sooooooo wonderfully-said, sweet friend, sometimes we all have these states of confusion and we don't know where we're going, but I know deep down as we let our conscience be our guides, we will find joy and love through all the questions and keep balance! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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