Open Poetry #18 |
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Within Me Dedicated to YOU |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England ![]() |
Within Me Within my soul there’s a place full of delight Illumed and brightened by your loving light You write wonderful words of love to me That sing of friendship that was meant to be Before you guided my steps away from hell I was bereft of hope I had nothing left to sell Then you came and showed me the way home You showed me I didn’t have to be alone Within my heart there’s a sanctuary divine A place where hope and love often dine Fed and nourished by the love from you And kept alive by your spirit pure and true I had wandered and fallen far from light Was confused and blinded in the dark of night Didn’t know where I was or how I got there You showed me love and taught me to care Within my spirit there’s your spirit still It lives in me now and so it always will Like twins whose minds are linked eternally We are united in spirit and live in harmony We resonate in time to the self-same song And we will do so our whole lives long If I should ever wander too far from home You hold the lamp that guides me home Marsha Dedicated to YOU for all you are and for the place you hold within me. I am enriched and blessed by the presence of you. To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* Marsha this is a beautiful poem to someone who shares a special place in your heart. Well said with heartfelt feelings. **big hugs** ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh Marsha I loved it all but the last two lines were really wonderful. floria |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
I can't imagine anyone who wouldn't be delighted to receive such a poem of praise and love. |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
hey sweetie this is a beautiful tribute to that special someone. (hugs) RP |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you always paint the most gorgeous visions of true love! (smiles) We are all so happy for you, sweet friend, we all wish you the greatest happiness for you always, may he forever light your heart with true love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marsha - this is just so soft and lovely. May the one that reads this, be forever in your heart my friend... BC |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Marsha, you made the tears roll down my cheeks.. so lovely and so very soft.. simply a wonderful poem. I can only imagine how wonderful that love of yours is to inspire this.. you keep on outdoing yourself!!!! ![]() Hugs, Pepper |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You who? You who? Geez, I sound like a yodeler!! ![]() Nicely penned, mushy one!! ![]() |
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True Reflections Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 143Ohio, USA |
Marsha, Once upon a forum, I stumbled, Looked for words, but often fumbled, Then was graced by a lady from Kent, Loved me even though I was bent. Looked to her for guidance and direction, From those mean poets, a wenches protection. She along, with her Aussie twin, Placed on my face a permanent grin. I'm better for having her, here in my life, We can flirt and have fun cause she ain't my wife. Just a wonderful woman from over the sea, Sending care packages to little ol' me. You wrote a beautiful poem, my friend. ![]() Roger |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Marsha,a beautiful dedication from a beautiful friend. ![]() ![]() Love, ![]() Juanita |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Oh Marsha, this was sooooo lovely! The flow was gorgeous! Love, ah...sigh... is such a wonderful thing when it is truly found! You expressed that so well! Bravo! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marsha, I am cut to the quick, I thought I was the only one...I should have known your are too beautiful to be confined to one. Sunshine must spread itself to bring joy to the world. Love this millions and squillions of happy bytes. *HuGGleS* Lynne Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Karen darling girl thank you so very much, I must say that I definitely am happy and I think perhaps it shows You are always so sweet to me thank you for always being such a faithful reader of my writing. YOU are special you know ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy ![]() ![]() To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Floria darling girl thank you so very very much YES darling girl this poem is special ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Canuckster thank you dear friend you are far too kind to me. ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy ![]() ![]() To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
lovely poem !!!!! ![]() |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I think I know just who I'll send this to via the e-card feature if you don't mind, Sweet Lady! This is just wonderful! *Jenn* |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*jenn smacks self in forehead* Umm..HELLO JENN! LIBRARY STUFF HERE! Ya mind a stay in my library? ![]() |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
RP darling girl thank you very very muchly YOU are such a great writer you know, that I am humbled that you can such nice things about me. This is a very special poem, and I know that the YOU in it really does appreciate it. But in truth this could apply to so many of my friends and family. They have each given me so very much. I have been blessed by having such love bestowed on me, particularly since I don’t deserve it. But thank you all eanyway Thank you for being you my dearest friend. Big smile ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy ![]() ![]() To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Noah darling boy thank you so very much, You are always so sweet to me, I thank you for always being there ready to read and send me warm love and smiles. YOU are special you know ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy ![]() ![]() To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy thank you muchly. YOU are always such an inspiration to me. YOUR use of line and imagery is utterly outstanding no one writes Romance the way you do You are always so sweet to me thank you. And thank you for the loving help and support you give YOU are one in a million ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy ![]() ![]() To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Pepper darling girl well who’d have thought it a year ago that I would be so happy and you would be even more so? But truly darling girl it’s wonderful to see you glowing so, YOU really are shining and it’s wonderful to see. And as for Passions lately there’s something about the warmth here now that wraps itself around your heart and you don’t want to stray. YOU however always had faith in me, thank you darling sister of mine. Isn’t love fabulous Big smile ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy ![]() ![]() To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
’Deer dear heart Yoo Hoo Sorry I simply couldn’t resist I can resist practically anything except temptation Thank you kindly dearest heart you are far too good to me. I enjoyed writing this one of those times perhaps when my thoughts actually got inscribed on the page. Big grin Thank YOU for your help and friendship dear ‘Deer it is appreciated and YOU are very much so ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
see yoRoger darling boy shhhhhhhhhhhh I think we have them fooled none of them suspect that we are good friends. I knew that I’d get away with locking you in my library Wonderful poem darling boy I’ll save it for those rainy days Do YOU think we’ve got away with it? MMmmmm we’re sure to have done ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy ![]() ![]() To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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