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Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2001-11-27 09:18 PM

I brace myself against the door
As you struggle to find the knob
I tell you that he can’t come in
you stand there and begin to sob

I hear him breathing out there
His heat permeates the door
No manner of begging gets me
To move from the spot on the floor

Another knock, but I stand firm
Why you want this, only Heaven knows
So you can continue to cry there
As he stands outside shouting ‘Dominoes’!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2001-11-27 09:25 PM

A dream about a Pizza man attack? It's dinner time again isn't it?

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-11-27 09:27 PM

I was thinking maybe about pizza too, but then, I suppose it could be something deeper, a mother protecting a child from an abusive man, knowing that once she steps out,all will fall like dominoes. But I'm on the pizza theory too LOL

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-11-27 10:56 PM

you always have that different view of the world. . . I like it. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2001-11-27 11:54 PM

Great one, Sharon! Brings back some memories for me.

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

5 posted 2001-11-27 11:54 PM

it wasn't the pizza guy--
it was digiorno's...heh

nice change of pace lady

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2001-11-28 12:14 PM

Methinks this goes alot deeper than deep dish too!

Next time I hold auditions? will you be the keeper of the gate? lol...
(She IS a Lioness, poet people!)

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

7 posted 2001-11-28 12:35 PM

I agree with Sea
Peaches

Robert A
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since 2001-10-29

Posts 174

8 posted 2001-12-06 11:03 AM

didn't expect that ending!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

9 posted 2001-12-06 11:30 AM

darn, now I'm hungry! Loved this, gave me a chuckle.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

True Reflections
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 143
Ohio, USA

10 posted 2001-12-06 11:54 AM

Sharon,
Pizza is the number one survival food for true expert eaters. I like it so much I don't even cut it into pieces. Just hold it and spin it while I chew.

This was fun.

Roger

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

11 posted 2001-12-06 12:00 PM

mmmm is it lunch time yet....This poem has a surprise ending with much that can be read between the lines. Very well done...now where is that pizza man? **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

OWG
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 155
California

12 posted 2001-12-06 05:33 PM

they leave it outside at the curb at my house...the pitbulls like the red hotbags they carry the pizza in..

cool stuff amiga

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