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A sonnet duet with SEA . . . Heart and Soul
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A sonnet duet with SEA . . . Heart and Soul |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Heart and Soul A duet with SEA ~*~ I don’t want to love you, with all my heart I don’t want to feel the pain, when we part I don't want to hold you then have to leave I don't want to kiss you for then I grieve I don’t want to miss you, when you’re not here I don’t want to keep you, in hearts revere I don't want to think of you, for my sake I don't want to dream of you, then awake I only know I want you, here, with me I only know I want you, endlessly I only know you are my single thought I only know what pain my love has wrought and still I love you, no matter the toll and still I love you, wholly, heart and soul  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Absence might make the heart grow fonder, but that doesn't make it any easier to bear.... I love the heart graphic. Nice job, you guys.  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
Hey Guys, your heading has capture it perfectly. "Heart & Soul". Love will do strange things to us, and still we want for more. Well written. Hugs Fee Expressions, |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* and your words say it all. This is a beautiful duet. You two write very well together. You put your hearts and souls into every word. I love it. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Two of the best doing what they do best....kudos to you both.  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! CLAPPING WILDLY!!! Yes you do, for both your hearts will always shine with true love you share with the loves of your lives! (smiles) Such sweet pure romantic love fills both your hearts, I LOVE IT!!! (BIG GROUP HIG) BRAVO!!! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet friends, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Elizabeth~ thank you, absence does make the heart grow fonder.... Fee~ thank you very much Startime~ thank you I really enjoy writing with Interloper, he is a very talented poet Balladeer~ thank you sweet man Noah~ you are such a dear, thank you ~SEA "If your ship doesn't come in, swim out to it." ~Jonathan Winters |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Oh it feels so good to be in love when that person loves you just as much! You two created a fantastic poem. Loved it. RP |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
What a fantastic writing team. Great job... ever deep...runs |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! You two do the love/duet thing oh so well! hugs, Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a wonderful collaboration Susan and Interloper! Beautifully and seamlessly composed ... just lovely! Much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
RosePetal ~ Yes, It's nice that we love each other. We're the best of friends AWC ~ SEA is the Star and I'm the gas Nancy ~ I find it easy to write with such a talented lady whom I adore Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-27-2001).] |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Love at its best. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you Walker, and don't let him fool you, he is the one who shines bright here |
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