Open Poetry #17 |
Hello from Heaven |
Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Hello from Heaven Hey, it's me! Letting you know I got here safe and sound For I didn't stop living once you put me in the ground I know through your tears it feels like goodbye But please understand, it was only my body that did die For at that exact moment of my passing My soul embedded the eternal sound of you laughing I now know that right now you need to do the weeping For you can only picture my forever sleeping But after you've wipe dry your eyes Remember what I tell you now, and this is no lie I was met by that person I have waited so long to see And for the first time in ages I felt totally free Though I was in bliss, alas you were still on my mind Part of me wanting to come back not knowing what I'd find So I stood for a moment hesitate within the light For if I should go on, you'd be evermore out of sight " Lay to rest your fear" said a most beautiful soft sigh " My trust I will bestow to you" was my reply It was then I understood my work on Earth was through It was my time to move on, even if it meant leaving you Your life must continue, don't dwell upon me I pray And know that I think of you each and everyday Though your eyes are blind to my new being Believe me when I say, it is you that I am seeing I hear your thoughts and feel your feelings And I'm there looking out for you in all your dealings But now my time is up, and back I must go So you see, this is just the first message I wanted you to know For I'll be back in your darkest hour The Lord has blessed me with this amazing power I will say not goodbye, for I am your leaven Until the day I meet you again, in Heaven Marina Nov. 26/2001 It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh gosh I love this poem. My heart goes out to any who have ever lost a loved one. It is so true...it is only those left behind who grieve for they are now without their loved one being near. *sigh* I too believe they are not far away and someday we will be reunited with them again never to be seperated. **hugs** This is truly a masterpiece to heal the soul. I love it. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Your life must continue, don't dwell upon me I pray And know that I think of you each and everyday Though your eyes are blind to my new being Believe me when I say, it is you that I am seeing I hear your thoughts and feel your feelings And I'm there looking out for you in all your dealings ***************************************** Such wonderful words of wisdom and comfort coming from our little earth bound angel up north. This creation you give us is definitely one of your best and I will be saving it for future reference. Loved it and also loved seeing you in the forums again. Don't let yourself become a stranger now ... ya hear?? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful expression of future desires...James |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Oh Marina, this is full of truth. I believe also that only the body dies! Heaven must be beautiful, and one day we will see our loved ones up there and never again be separated from them! Thank you for sharing this. It made my day! |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Startime, thank you so very much. I don't know anything about it being a masterpiece but I most certainly am glad it touched your soul. The soul is true self that makes us who we are. Your compliants are too kind. Mark, an angel??? Me??? You defintely haven't been taling with my friends. LOL. But as always I do enjoy reading your comments and you know they mean a great deal to me. Don't worry partner, I won't go far from the third tumbleweed.......promise. James, as always...thank you. Rosepetal, I am very happy I was able to make your day a little brighter. I truly believe in every word I wrote. No doubts in my mind. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I know where this one comes from, it's good to see that you're listening to the spirit. . . this is one of your best. . . ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
This remeinded me of what my English teacher told us before she died. Peaches |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*smiling at you and your wisdom's rhyme* very very cool write Marina girl.... (and I wont touch MC's angel comment) rofl Its so good to see your muse gifting you with all these inspires....sometimes we forget all we have to do is listen with our hearts...then pick up our pens this is a butterfly poem for sure he said ... "dont cry" ... |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Sven. thank you, but in actaul fact I have more then one person to thank for this piece. One on this plain and one on other. Peaches, I not sure if this piece made you feel good or bad in that case, but I hope it made you feel good. For we truelly do not stop living once our body's die. JM, girl...you better not go there! LOL. You could say of late I have had a great deal of inspiration as far as the last couple of new pieces of have written. Some from my Dad who recently told me never to stop writing and always to do my best, as he was told I have had a talent for writing all my life and I never knew it. And I have a wonderful friend of mine by the name of James Van Praggh. He is the world renowed medium, and of late my new wonderful teacher to the world beyond. So I have to say thank you to both of them. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen. |
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