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Soliloquy |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Yes, this is my soliloquy composed of dreams and fantasy shattered into pure illusion finding love is just delusion. I gazed in vain for unseen knight his true desire-absolve my plight consistent disappointment thus as knights of steel erode to rust. Yes, this is what I have become through love and loss and nothing won Tis time to move through shuttered doors as surely there is something more. To touch new dreams in quiet hope to ride the upside of this slope no need for knights in light of day their use has crumbled in the fray. So chapter, verse, and movng on accepting that my love is gone Pale moonlight covers me alone I step into the great unknown. I took a walk around the world to ease my troubled mind-I left my body lying somewhere in the sands of time. (3 Doors Down) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Sandra, this is so so sad but I know there is something more for you, and will accept it with bliss and hold your true prince forever! (sigh) I love you, sweet friend!!! (kiss on cheek) Your soliloquy melts all our hearts and lights the skies with fairy tales bound to come true! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Sometimes, in a very strange way, when you move away from something, you are actually approaching it but from a different angle... An expressive write, Sandra... don't stop. -MVS "If you don't ask: you don't get." -Steve Miller |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I thought the title was about me (a silly guy). Then I read you wonderful piece and realized it was about exploration. Welcome to the "great unknown" sometimes referred to as life  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I find that a deep breath always helps before stepping into the great unknown. . . well done. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sandra, just remember, you never walk alone! You write with a sense of peace here...and I like it. It is as though you have come to a realization...and now you are ready to move on. Hold your pretty head up high and face the world with a bright new smile sweetie. Love and hugs, Nancy ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
So chapter, verse, and movng on accepting that my love is gone Pale moonlight covers me alone I step into the great unknown ------------------------ A wonderful touching and expressive write.... It has touched my heart in so many ways with its melancholic voice... Take care ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Life is filled with suprises, dear Sandra. There is no telling what awaits you. When love does come it will be worth all the time that passed as you waited for your knight. **hugs** Take care, dear one. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Welcome ... (from the knight three doors down) |
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emily Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 142USA |
it's beautiful in form and structure but more important I sense a deep respect from the author for herself and her own beauty. Well done. Emily |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Expressions from a fine poet. Well done. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Stepping into the great unknown is the only way to live life and there you are bound to find your way to the happiness that you above anyone else deserve. Beautiful writing and nice to see you in the mood for a challenge in life. See you at the top. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
It's very important for us to accept the truth...it brings us to reality and to a new path...James |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I have read you in so many stages of expression Sandra. I know exactly which one you are in and know you have to get to that point by your own decision...welcome to the threshold of discovery. I hope you find yourself as exquisite as you've always been to the rest of us! Big Hugs! Sincerely, Regina |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
If only you knew how much this speaks of me! So well penned, my library must have this! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
As you step into the great unknown, please remember you are not alone. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
The great unknown is only a scary place, until you get there and get used to it. Fantastic write Sandra. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
This is a beautiful write. The flow is perfect. As you step into the unknown just remember there's someone out there just waiting to be found. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
cat, But everything else is there, you see and you are as prepared as you can be It is not into the abyss you are thrown but merely the darkness before the morn. e (And trust in the honesty of your own words.) |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Let's hold hands. - You write your heart Sandra, gosh do you write your heart. *Peace you. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
lil sis, when you step into the Great Unknown, you will find most of your poetic friends here, including myself, waiting there to take your hand!! This had sad overtones, but ended with a decisive and positive thought!! Loved it!! ...you are me, I am you, we are one... |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
There are still knights, damsels in distress and dragons to kill in this world, they are just in disguise. I found your words very moving, stepping out into the unknown can be a wonderous thing. Be well. Regards, Olias. |
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