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For One Little Bird...
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For One Little Bird... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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There are times when words can't say the feel, the comfort wish, in want to send. Times of loss, in moments of the hurt inside, to you my friend. It's more than one should need endure this time of year, meant to be shared. Times when nearness, arms in hold should cushion you, this unprepared. These times, the distance, felt this day seems longer than my arms extend. Times of you, compassioned with I grieve, lament, with you my friend. Maureen *I can't be there in body, but am there in spirit with you and your family. ((Hugssss)) Chanson "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
A very thougtful write. This time of year can be very difficult for a variety of people, those who suffered loss or whose background would stir memories of less kind holiday seasons past. "Happy people have no history" - French Proverb |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is sweet, and I'm sure your friend appreciates the kind intent of your thoughts.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What's that saying, "birds of a feather,"...know when to read words that will lift them again... this is lovely, as is the gesture...well done, little one... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Maureen, a compassionate write. Well done! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
When a poet use their gift to offer compasion and understanding to another then it is a treat indeed and that is exactly what this is. Beautiful heartfelt sentiments here and well expressed. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
A wonderful poem that touches the heart of the reader and reminds us that during this season there are those who do not have the joy of being in the arms of loved one. Thank you. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Dusty Rhodes Junior Member
since 2001-10-14
Posts 27 |
A very lovely write, Wynter. Enjoyed it very much |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
What can I say. *watery smile* I am truely blessed to have you as my caring, sympathetic friend, M. Your thoughts, your prayers, your touching poem, your hugs...all are cherished. Saying the words Thank You seems to be a small gesture but believe me they carry much meaning and come from the bottom of my heart. (((Hugs))) Little Bird/Chanson |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
RSWells, serenity, Sunshine, Interloper, Mark Bohannan, Startime, Dusty Rhodes... A very special poet friend opened her heart and house to me in a time of need. I can't offer her my home at the moment, but I can open my heart and thought and prayers during her time of loss. I will never forget the time shared nor the caring offered from a wonderful family that helped me through a rough couple of days. *s Chanson, sometimes when you meet on here you assume from words the kind of person one is. You were then, and you are in real...a true friend. And I thank you for that friendship, it brings me great pleasure sharing with you and your family. *s hugssss back Maureen "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul." (J.Garland) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 11-28-2001).] |
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