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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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if you were to stand before me would i know you by your eyes would your soul shine through your bodily disguise... who are you with your flesh zipped tightly about you would i know you by the aura that surrounds you... what form of man might enclose the soul i know who would i find if your face to me did show... would your soul shine through a putty and water disguise if you were to stand before me would i know you by your eyes... -dgvarner 11-27-01 ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Oh, I would hope so. Besides, I'm lousy at disguise! Nice write, dg. I like it. e |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
E..i would hope so too...  thank you much for reading..  hugs, g |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
OH MY GOODNESS, this is spectacular goshhhhhhhhhhhh the flow of the poem was soooooo smooth now I wanna go back N read it again so I'm keeping this reply short Thank u4a fantastic read2nite... Hugs2uPoetFriend *~coco~* |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
beautifully done..I think the eyes say so much...I can usually tell by the eyes what one is thinking...they can not disguise true feelings *s ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Somehow I think you'd know, take care! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Ah, the eyes are the windows to the soul. So, yes, I think you would know him by his eyes If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
A wonderful pondering dgVarner! So much is revealed through the eyes ... you've captured this beautifully, much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
COCOBACI..thank you too much i'm so glad you enjoyed it so well! WYNTER..i think so too..the things the eyes can say..and oh how they kiss... lol EDDIE..ya think? maybe... at least, i like to think so..TRACEY..yes.. probably right..KIT..so glad you enjoyed! thanks for reading! hugs, g [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 11-28-2001).] |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
the unmistakable look into and thru the eyes. You would know!!!!!!!!!!! great write!!!! Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
"putty and water disguise" great image! nice write! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
the big red maple leaf painted on my forhead might give me away. But, you never know cause I often look in the mirror and ask who is that guy. Great write sweets. Parker |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
I like the flow of this poem, and the feeling left behind is good as well. I do wonder if I'll know him if he comes in a different package. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
BERNIE..thank you much! DOREEN..glad you enjoyed the strange image..lol thanks for reading! PARKER..i dunno..i think if it wasnt a maple leaf..you could just speak..and we'd ALL know who YOU were... thanks parker.. MON..but..if you dont know the package to begin with..how do you know what housing of the soul to look for...? ... thank you hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I bet a twinkle of love in the eyes would give him away....This poem is wonderful reading. I enjoyed every word. I kept nodding my head up and down saying "somehow she would know" **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- Ya know...you're writing some AWESOME stuff these days! Ok...so I've ALWAYS loved your writing, but lately...WOW!  Love this! Love ya  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
STARTIME..ya think i'd know huh... maybe..just maybe.. thanks for reading!TRICKS..THANK YOU THANK YOU..maybe you've just been away too long..you were having withdrawls--so ANYTHING i write would be ok with you...teeheehee...glad youre enjoying hugs, g |
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