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Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2001-11-26 06:54 PM

First cooling breeze of vespertine,
...dancing through the trees,
Gentle whispers of the wind,
...calling through the eaves,
Singing songs of far aways,
...of loves forever lost,
Springtime flowers and summer's burn,
...December's icy frost,
Madrigals of what has been,
...of what will ever be,
Echoing throughout the halls,
...in evening's symphony,
Then music fades as breezes fall,
...with blackness of the night,
Eventide to darkness wends,
...song passes with the light,
In the silence of the dark,
...no sound to mortal ear,
In the silence of the dark,
...only rafters hear.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-11-26 07:22 PM

I could read this kind of writing forever, it blocks out everything else and comforts. Thank you for this.

Kathleen
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2001-11-26 07:24 PM

sings like a minstrel's song! wonderful phrasing and magical in that it seemed to take me to another time. Lovely.

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

3 posted 2001-11-26 07:29 PM

Tim
This was nothing short of wonderful. You weaved pure magic with your words.
Take care......Sue

Suetang

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2001-11-26 07:33 PM

Tim~This was enchanting and I just love the presentation. Hugs, Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

moonbeam2
New Member

since 2001-11-24

Posts 4

5 posted 2001-11-26 07:53 PM

Ohhh, Wow! I could feel time softy and gently enveloping me (if there's such an expression) - the past, the future merging into the present... all coming together as one .... a sense of time ... yet of timelessness... your poem has ministered to my soul.
Dunno if this is the proper place to do it (If it isn't.. I'd like to extend my apologies) ... but I would like to take this opportunity to say Hello to everyone. I am a newbie and I feel so lucky to have found such a wondeful site as Passions.
moonbeam2

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