Open Poetry #17 |
Passionate Dreams Await You |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
In your dreams I will reside. Holding you ever close, ever near. Letting you sleep at my side. As my heart holds you my dear. Take an even breath and let it go for this breeze will I feel. Keep the strength, don’t be low. For my hour is nigh, and so real. Listen to the softness of my words As I whisper into your sleeping ear think of us as two soaring birds flying high, on winged air clear. Rest well through these coming days As your dreams are filled and flow of passion’s moments and ways which only I will ever you bestow. Love me as I kiss your eyes and face Give me your tenderness this night Dream passionately as love does embrace. For in our dreams we will be each night. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is a very comforting poem! Kathleen |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
man, i wish i had a guy who would recite poetry to me as I get comfy and ready for bed. That would be nice. Magnus, this is a beautiful gem! Does your wife write poetry??? If so, I'd like to see some of hers. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* A poem that can't help but touch the heart of the reader and make them want to dream these passionate dreams. Very well done. I love it. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
This was so very romantic and so very lovely. Take care.......Sue Suetang |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
As gentle as a summer's breeze Barry! A soft and tender write my friend. *sigh*...I'm getting another coffee. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
So romantic, I love it! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Oh Magnus, you do write romance so well. This is another beauty from your pen of love. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Magnus, Such beautiful words from such a great man.This dream is worth beholding. Peaches |
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misguided angel Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 106Australia |
Magnus, you write of love so well. Such beauty and enchantment. I enjoyed muchly. Andrea Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so. |
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