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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Just one moment in time and a love filled with awe silver goblets of wine only hearts that we saw. Such a moment so sweet underneath glowing moon made our life so complete yet it left all too soon. Just one moment alone yet feels like ten thousand absence stays unatoned no longer beside him. Relive just one moment, this my unfulfilled dream but not quite as it went Things were not as they seemed. Goodbye to the moment and goodbye, memories On the winds he was sent and they've blown him from me. A moment lost in time too late now to restore I was his, he was mine but then gone as before. His love fabricated made of secrets and lies heart broken by hatred repititious goodbyes. I took a walk around the world to ease my troubled mind-I left my body lying somewhere in the sands of time. (3 Doors Down) [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 11-26-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Sandra, I know just how you feel, for in my dreams I feel I'm only in love momentary, but I wake up saddened to see I have no love in my arms. (big hugggsssssss) Your heart breaks in this sad poem, but I believe with all my heart you will love again and will keep it forever, and this sadness will only be momentary when happiness comes to you. (sigh) My heart is always with you, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
We are so in sync sometimes, we MUST try a duet sometime! You KNOW I understand this one...  |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes, I know this too |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
come on, sweetheart, lets go back to the future where anything is possible! Kathleen |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
You touch my heart sweetie on this poem you write... Hugs2uDearFriend *~coco~* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sandra, you're tugging at my heart strings girl! I know this feeling all too well. Hang in there sweetie! Your knight is out there....somewhere in time. Love ya, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
(((hugs))) to you Sandra... this is a wonderful write, my friend... keep writing these emotions... regards, sudhir |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh Sandra, my heart goes out to you. I know that you will have many more moments one day. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Oh, I like Kathleens reply to this. Yes, the future where anything is possible. I think that may be one of the dreamiest, yet wisest things I will read tonight. Your poem is lovely Sandra, and speaks from the heart of past pain...but yes, dream of the future and all that it can be. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Seems to me life is full of steps. Especially numerous and large for many are the steps we climb emotionally. In fact, I think in our lives on the physical plane, the biggest task we face is learning to control our emotions - love, hate, anger, saddness, happiness, and I think the biggest task of all, is LOVE - learning TO LOVE; meaning, no matter what our experience with it, i.e., long-lasting, short-term, abrupt, wonderful, ugly and all the other adjectives one could use, LOVE is what it's all about. Handling it, coming to terms with it, and always, ALWAYS feeling it, is the biggest task we have before us - and all the things that happen to us in the process is just another step up in the attainment of the "perfect" love of Christ. I think love between two people is the most beautiful love of all that we deal with - and I believe if one learns to live with the loss of anothers affections, and uses the experience as a growth medium, adding it to the basket of memories we carry, and relishing what was there as we move on (not that it doesn't hurt - I understand the pain involved (been there done that!); and it's how we move on that counts - one climbs two or three steps up the stairs, not just one or less. Anyway - just a wee look into some of the things I toss around, tend to lean towards and try to live by. Enjoyed your write, my friend - I can't catch fish worth a hoot, but every once-in-awhile I land one that makes me bait the hook again. Know what I mean. jwesley |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
say goodbye my dear say it only once again with finality Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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