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Lost In Your Absence
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Lost In Your Absence |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Without you I feel like a rough grain of sand A mere speck of silicone lying alone, yearning waiting for love to again sweep me gently away Without your presence, this fragile grain is lost. I daydream of your closeness, your scent. My open hand slowly brushing your hair. My fingers tracing your curves ever lightly. Your flesh responding to me, tensing. I touch your toes, one by one in my mind. My hands warm your calves and beyond Blowing softly in your ear, you squirm A sigh escapes soft lips, slightly parted. Without this moment of dreams, touches my mind would waste in my emptiness. Lost soul and heart would falter and fail. My lips silenced, can answer only to you. Keep me with you along crystal streams into the regions of your sacred dreams. Let me hold and kiss you in waning light. For I hunger to see you this lonesome night. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Keep me with you along crystal streams into the regions of your sacred dreams. Let me hold and kiss you in waning light. For I hunger to see you this lonesome night. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ OH Magnus! I haven't even had dinner yet and you have me sighing and swooning all over the place! I'll go put the coffee on. Um, did I say I really enjoyed this? Well, I sure did!! Can't you tell by the smile on my face?  ~hugs, Nancy~~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh yes I can Nancy....and yes...put the coffee on....thanx... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I know this feeling... We are left to wonder if they can feel it when we think of them... (I believe they can). This was a zephyr of thought in a universal field of reads. Nice work, Magnus. -MVS "If you don't ask: you don't get." -Steve Miller |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh I think this is perfect, so much happening. Lost in dreams we must be, cause reality is not so good. Sandra |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
very sorrowful, Magnus, very reflective piece. Kathleen |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes. . .there's a deep feeling of loss here. . . just reaches out and grabs you. . . well done. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I agree with Enchantress..I love the last stanza! Magnus, you are a very talented writer. Honestly, you are an inspiration to me. Love, RP |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You speak well of a yearning soul, looking to be fulfilled. I enjoyed this very much Magnus. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Liked this Magnus....James |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Keep me with you along crystal streams into the regions of your sacred dreams. Let me hold and kiss you in waning light. For I hunger to see you this lonesome night. What an afterthought!!!innerthought!!! present fantasy!!! Superb verse and this stanza is so enticing even to a stranger. Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, Keep me with you along crystal streams into the regions of your sacred dreams. These line are worth saving. Enjoyed |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
~Keep me with you along crystal streams into the regions of your sacred dreams. Let me hold and kiss you in waning light. For I hunger to see you this lonesome night.~ Yes me too, love these fabulous piece, and the last stanza is really beautiful. Excellent done! Charisma ~*TMP*~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* Absolutely breathtaking. You show such emotion in your writing that I am always amazed by your talent. I love it.  **hugs**Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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