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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2001-11-25 11:02 PM


Your eyes, the sky
And lullabies
All go through a change

Your eyes get cloudy
The sky gets pouty
And lullabies get
More strange


© Copyright 2001 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
RosePetal
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1 posted 2001-11-25 11:35 PM


hmmmmm this is different, I like it.
If things didn't change once in a while, we'd get so bored of repetition o yuh! : )

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2001-11-26 04:45 PM



Makes sense to me....

cruz
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3 posted 2001-11-26 07:12 PM


and it makes good cents too!  kneedough


nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2001-11-27 06:46 AM


there is always truth to your words, Walt

~Wynter

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2001-11-27 06:56 AM


Ah Walt ... a lullibye to smile by, much enjoyed!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Tracey
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where insanity meets breeding
6 posted 2001-11-27 07:00 AM


No sense?, no, this makes sense

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

vlraynes
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7 posted 2001-11-28 06:48 PM



Walt-
   Interesting write, my friend.
   You always tend to make me think...
   I like that.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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