Open Poetry #17 |
Untitled (suggestions?) |
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
with the weather of life. Please do not cast love down as it rakes the skin of your dreams for one last promising blow. Just answer the voices you think you hear in evening's unmuttered cadence and rest weary sighs upon tendrils of wind. What color is the passion that makes its statement in the fertile recesses of your imagination? How boldly does love blush when kissed with acknowledgement from two unwittingly fond spirits? Just stop and feel. Just examine your memory for all those wonderful moments and let them scream whisper float roam. Give your words lips. Write them a tongue so that they may speak your soul and pour passion from the tap of inspiration. ~I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!~ [This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 11-25-2001).] |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Beautiful write as always Jennifer. Deep and thoughtful. I’m not good at titles, but I’m sure you’ll get plenty of suggestions here. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Good advice.. I have to try that sometime! :-) I know what you mean when you say to remember all of those happy things in the past rather than all those embarrasing, unhappy things in the past..oh yea and I good title for this would have to be.... Let them Scream -or- Stop and Feel -or- The Harvesting of Spirits -or- howbout we just leave that sucker untitled, cuz it's a tough one to name. Very beautiful writing Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
what about "unspoken inspiration". . . this is wonderful. . . you speak from the heart, as always. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
I like this one.I have to agree with Sven that Unspoken Inspirsation was the same thing I was thinking. Peaches |
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