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Open Poetry #17

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EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2001-11-25 10:07 PM

Electronic techno DJs,
Construct the beats with thier souls.
The strummer who sits behind his guitar,
Displays his heart through his magic melody,
Alone, like a shooting star across the midnight sky,
In the midst of a black, frozen universe,
Still burning with a passion and fervor,
Dancing like the wildest dervish,
As his fingers and chords do the same.
Poets brave a canvas without sound.
As they reach into our hearts through depths profound.
Across this world,
Strangers shed tears for them,
Understanding what it was that they had to say,
Feeling for them, praying for them,
hoping they make out allright.
Just like the musicians,
Making the best of every moment of this short life,
Streaking across the sky.

Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

1 posted 2001-11-25 10:13 PM

What a great observation you have here. I like the thoughts in this.

Making the best of every moment of this short life,
Streaking across the sky.

I agree with that wholeheartedly. We must make the most of life, for you only get out of life, what you put into it.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

2 posted 2001-11-25 10:18 PM

This is great! Music and Poetry go hand in hand since music is lyrics of poetry! I really like this! I'll have to keep my eyes peeled for more of your work. : )

RP

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2001-11-25 10:23 PM

EagleScorpion - what a great read, as I play at the guitar, and also write poetry. A truly integrated combination of both in your writing...

BC

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

4 posted 2001-11-25 10:33 PM

Good write.As I love music and poetry and they go hand in hand.
peaches

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