Open Poetry #17 |
One Fine Day In The Country |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
The sun streaks through the window On this magical Summer's day You look so relaxed and peaceful On the pillow where you lay We rise and greet the morning As we begin to plan our day We'll spend some time out in the country So very soon we'll be on our way Many fields of green sweep past us Cattle and sheep are in the field The farmer is tending to his crops What a bountiful harvest he'll yield We arrive at our destination The country air so fresh and clean As we walk on through the meadow Towards the gently flowing stream I've prepared a picnic basket With a spread I've made for two On a rug down by the river Is where I'll make sweet love to you You pick a chain of daisies And you place them in my hair This place is so lovely and quiet It seems we're the only ones here You stroke my hair and you kiss me Can I freeze this moment in time? You whisper the words 'I love you' Now I know forever you'll be mine I lean over towards you And upon your mouth I place a kiss Soon we'll surrender to one another In love's neverending bliss Suetang |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Got to watch out that's what the country does to you! LOL You should go there more often!! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Suetang - a very upbeat writing, and a pleasure to read... BC |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Gotta get out in the country...pronto...James |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Oh my, what a wonderful day in the country this is. The scenery, the air, and that picnic and the love....well, it just sounds simply heavenly. Alas, we are now going into winter, but you have given me something to look forward too for next year. I think I will try a day like this....now...if someone will just join me!!!! If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, Another awesome poem. I love how your mind works. I love your picture of passion. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Sue, this is soooooooo romantic! (sigh) When I meet my dream lady sparrow, I dream of taking her to a beautiful meadow or waterfall and kissing her there! (sigh) You are soooooo romantic, sweet Sue, you share a picnic of romance with us all! (sigh) I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
*S* This is a picture of something that is a reality or a dream for all of us. Very well put. Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Excellent read I enjoyed it. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all so very much for your lovely words. I'm so glad you enjoyed your time in the countryside. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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