Open Poetry #17 |
I Send To You The Music |
Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
I send to you the music A special gift from me to you. I hope it brings you happiness And does not make you blue. I send to you the music Whispered words begin to flow. Reflections of another time Reliving thoughts of long ago. I send to you the music Sailing through this lonely night. The resounding melody Intensifies with delight. I send to you the music The angels now are singing. High up above in the clouds The choirs gently ringing. I send to you the music. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
And what beautiful music it is.Thanks. Peaches |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Lyrical lovely rhyme. Regards, Olias. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh this is lovely! Enjoyed so much! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
So nice to hear your music again, Eloise! This is lovely! |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Thank you Peaches And also to you Olias. I appreciate you coming in to read and comment. Nancy, thanks to you and I'm glad that you enjoyed this. Denise, I'm glad to be back. Thank you for the lovely! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Eloise, a beautiful poem...a wonderful song... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Eloise How beautifully your words flowed. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Welcome Back, Eloise! This is beautifully lyrical. Nicely done! God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Music such as this always falls gentle on ones ears...very, very nice my friend. jwesley |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Thanks to all of you and your wonderful comments and for the welcome back Elizabeth, it has been a while. So many new and talented poets are here, as well as the old gang, and I'm enjoying reading all that I can. [This message has been edited by Eloise (edited 11-27-2001).] |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Eloise ... I'll gladly listen to the music that you sing. This was just lovely ... much enjoyed, wonderful to read you again! Best wishes, /Kit |
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