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WhiteKnight Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 83NY |
Night Why hide it? The loneliness The tears All those fears Awakening each night Something feels not quite right An emptiness in the night. To tired to even fight All that was is no more All that will be is emptiness Only shadows of half forgotten dreams Echo in the screams Soul lost Searching for light Needing some this night Loneliness of heart thunders in the silence Searching for love returned Finding only glimpses of might be Could have been The shadows dace in the dark Revealing the loneliness of soul |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Loneliness must be a spell, because everyone feels it once in a while. ((Hugs to you)) This was a good write you penned here! |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Loneliness is a hard emotion to deal with.Know that you are not alone.(hugs) Peaches |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good write Corey! Sad but very well expressed. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
WhiteKnight - sad what you write, but I have known where you have been, as I also have been there... BC |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
I certainly think I'm feeling this mood...possibly even some of these thoughts today. I love this. I am many. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I can feel the sad loneliness in this poem and can say honestly that I know what you are feeling. I feel it often. Very well written. **hugs** My heart goes out to you.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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