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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-11-25 04:46 PM

As You Tenderly Soften
   My Lovers Heart

I long to touch
   the woman I love
      like a soft delicate flower.

I want to be
   with the woman I love
      in every midnight hour.

I will need no other
   lover as she saturates
      me in her April showers.

Oh Lord tenderly
   soften my lovers heart
      while I pause to admire
         your glorious awesome power.

JamesLee
  November25
      2001

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-11-25 04:49 PM

Oh James!!! Gawd you are good! This one left me speechless! How wonderful and I love the last verse. Very well done!
~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

misguided angel
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since 2001-11-23

Posts 106
Australia

2 posted 2001-11-25 04:52 PM

"As you tenderly soften my lovers heart"......
that is exactly what you have done here James.
Andrea

Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2001-11-25 04:53 PM

AMEN...and a very creative way of presenting
it to us... I liked it.

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

4 posted 2001-11-25 04:57 PM

"I want to be
with the woman I love
in every midnight hour."

That was my fav part. Lovely James!

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

5 posted 2001-11-25 05:28 PM

James,
WOW!!!!
Peaches

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