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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2001-11-25 02:32 PM

The End Of A Rainbow

Seasons are becoming
as Nature comes and goes
the Thunder rolls with Lightning
and the Sun and Rain bows

As Storms wash the Lands
Moons crest the rising Tide
Erosion will take the sands
as Time spreads far and wide

Jungles fall, Ice will melt
its known, the signs are there
what we lose may not be felt
who said Life was fair

What to do? Where to go?
Stand where lightning won't strike
find the end of a Rainbow
enjoy, bathe in the like

Don't waste what you have still
remember what Mother has done
cherish life, don't horde your fill
before all turns to none

* Something I wrote awhile ago
but is fitting to Wynter's RAINBOW'S END.
*s

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2001-11-25 03:44 PM

Also fitting of how our earth is changing.
And there may not be a rainbow at the end
one day, nice write Craig.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-11-25 03:57 PM

"And the thunder rolls....and the lightning strikes.." *Gee, there goes Nancy trying to sing again!* lol. Great write here Craig! Sorry don't agree with Magnus....

there will always be a rainbow!
~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

3 posted 2001-11-25 04:36 PM

Thank you both for the comments.

Yes, there may not be a rainbow at the end the way things are going ...
but I believe, as Nancy seems, that the pot of gold is in the heart ...
you only need to find the right match to create your own.

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

4 posted 2001-11-25 04:50 PM

I think there will always be a rainbow...however, I don't know how many people will stop to look at it and appreciate it!

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

5 posted 2001-11-25 05:34 PM

Nice write.I hope more people will stop and notice.
Peaches

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

6 posted 2001-11-25 07:37 PM

So true ,ladies ...
that's why we must shine
the best we can do
to create a way
for those simple few

Thank you for your shining words!!

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2001-11-26 06:00 AM

Stand where lightning won't strike

well that is s ome good advice..*s thank you Craig. hugs to you for your friendship

~Wynter

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

8 posted 2001-11-27 04:33 PM

as storms wash the lands"

this is fantastic.....I can picture the storms renewing the earth....my view anyway....lovely thoughts...

Greeneyes~

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Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

9 posted 2001-11-27 04:49 PM

When I first saw the title I wanted to ask if you found the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow. What I felt from this poem is that we should grab hold of life and live it to the fullest for we know not when the rainbows may stop shining in our lives. Very well done, Craig. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

10 posted 2001-11-27 04:55 PM

Oh, I love all the wonderfully descriptive aspects of nature you've captured in this piece Craig ... beautiful imagery, much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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