Open Poetry #17 |
Millions of Wishes |
rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Half moon swinging like a pendulous ax I ride in moment’s dreaming expanse where light doth dwell behind bright stars glancing far, time’s spell of bizarre standing high upon the shadowed side I glide as though a child, sliding falling inside the craters, out of breath cows flying skyward, I stumble in my step Floating as a feather no pain, no rain on my moon beam parade. Starlight wishing trains streaming in violent storms..All of you dreaming! Sending asteroids of confusion..Stop the Screaming! I cry out, in happy tone..I’m not alone There are others up here within the glow Chasing them round, up and down the crescent jiggle Just missing the tag man, tripping I giggle He hears you! The man on the moon, but he must sleep also! Still, I swing on night beam vines, singing alto lullabyes to babes in waiting, teaching the spoons to trill a giant leap of belief The plate falls and breaks the silence where I wake and wander through the daylight wondering if all our wishes will come true depends on the view inside of me and you. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
In my soul poetry, boy I coasted with this one, Regina, well done poetess!!!!!!! Kathleen |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Millions of wishes, wishes for free, millions of wishes, wishes for me. (ha that was corny) Anyway where was I, oh yea.. very good writing.. you dreams shall guide you.. tell the man on the moon i sed "Wassup" Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I think most dreams will come true if we keep pursuing them...not always in the form we look for...James |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Now that was enjoyable!! Not every wish can come true but a million would nicely do!! I liked the nursery rhyme twist and for you I have so wished ... to live each dream that you drew. An excellent write!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Regina! I too liked the nursery rhyme bits in there as well. Very enjoyable..and gave me a few ideas to boot! Great write poetess! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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misguided angel Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 106Australia |
Wow, this really kept me busy for a few minutes, rwood. I really enjoyed it. Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Fantastic. Sways as you read it. Sandra |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
I think there is always a chance to catch our dreams.Nice write. Peaches |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
I wish I had dreams like this, wonderfully written I enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. Regards, Olias. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Regina Yet another wonderful journey you have afforded me through your words. This was great! Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
very enjoyable! I don't really know why but as i was reading this i began to hum that falling star song by perry come-- maybe i will put this one in my pocket... cheers, jamie There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
How lovely Regina. This is like a dancing lullaby. I'm up there on your moon beam parade with you. For I believe in wishes come true...but I'm an eternal optimist, an eternal dreamer...I like life better that way If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
a wonderful poem...and an equally wonderful picture! signed...flamboozled in Florida |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Wow! Thanks everyone of you for visiting my moon beam parade!! I had this dream of wishes being thrown at the moon while I was on it and cows were jumping like the nursery rhyme! I'm really weird aren't I. LOL! Hugs to all and I hope all your wishes come true! Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Better late than never. You ask if you are weird - well do you have a spoon in your hand? The dish ran away with the spoon remember? Now you realize you have afforded me a whole new venue - writing my dreams, but you want to read weird, I got weird for you LOL. This was delightful as is your fantastic new picture. Loved the poem. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Mysteria: Now that would be wonderful..to get you to chart your dreams! I know I'd read!!! All of your work is awesome and I sincerely appreciate your compliments! I look forward to the posts! Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Wow, I'm impressed! This is really really good. Great imagery, great imagination. Moon beams dancing everywhere! Deb |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet Regina! (smiles) It makes me think of the cows jumping over the moon and the spoon and the fork and the plate coming out to play. (sigh) Sooooooo beautiful! I love your visions! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Life just isn't life without wishes and dreams. This was a wonderful read and the flow was a true treat. Excellent writing indeed. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Nicely written, Regina. *hugs* Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Very good. Nice new pik. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Deb: I sincerely thank you! May your wishes be met this beautiful eve. Noah:The originator of that rhyme was genuinely imaginative weren't they! I just tagged along. Love and Hugs! Mark: We must have the Man on the moon and the wishing star! Even the four leaf clover. Dreams and wishes keep us filled with magic! Thank you so much. Michael: Hey Poet! Somebody misses your words! ME! ~Hugs! Bob: So glad you stopped in! Thank you kindly Sir! Been missing you around here! Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Regina, Did you see me? I think I was there. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
I see the Moody Blues backing you up on this one and a hell of a light show......your photographs show only a prettier you. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ok......I'm just gonna shut up now and silently whisper to the winds for you to hear.......tis wonderful Regina....you should be proud!! Hugs. You should be proud....as proud as I am of you!! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Catch my dream if it you see A simple one, that wanders free To give me thoughts to share as you To give me gift as you have too Dear Regina, loved it, your mind is so full of adventures, may we enjoy them all. Another great write. Sincerely Rick |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a wonderfully imaginative and vivid tale Regina! Excellent phrasing and flow ... thank you for the smiles and visuals this brought about ... very much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
For imagination, for captivating writing, for intensity, for delight, for poetic beauty, you get an A+ in all categories I admire your writing Liz |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Larry: Yes! You were the tag man...you sneaky devil! Richard: I'd take that and run with it for sure..and thanks Donna: You got it! You understood my weirdness. I'm up there and everyone's wishing at the same time and the wishes are like rocks/marshmellows being thrown!! LOL! No need to stop wishing..the dodging was fun! Besides I know you..you probably had some for me and I for you! Hugs~somy! Rick: Dearest Poet..you need no fairy poetmother! LOL! You are very gifted indeed and I always look forward to your verse. Kit: I sincerely appreciate that your kind reply! So glad to have you in my parade!! Hugs1 Liz: Yes! I have an A!! I have an A. You've made me very happy! Thanks millions! Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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