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Lost In love
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Lost In love |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Lost In Love This newfound love that I have been Lucky to find inside your heart Showed me that life can now begin Love like I’ve never known can start  Everything old seems so brand new These eyes that used to be so blind Wake to beauty I never knew Something I’d never thought I’d find You don’t know what you give to me Words of love cannot express With you is where I want to be Lost within your soft tenderness For my Dave, who I love more and more with every passing day. I love you. "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*sigh* I think that about covers it. . .  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
You know, it's funny how trivial it all seems once you find that special person. Congrats, and many blessings upon your relationship with him. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Awwwww so sweet and loving. Dave is going to LOVE this. May you two always be happy together : ) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Love the line "lost in your soft tenderness." James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
If this doesn't get you a dozen roses and much more....let me know....we will gang up on him.... Very nicely done...a beautiful tribute to one you love. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
A dozen roses ... sounds more like a vacation to some tropical island is more appropriate!! This something to hold!! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Thank you all for your replies. You are all so kind. A dozen roses huh?  I can live with that... I never got roses before *cough* hint *cough* I'm just kidding!!! lol The fact that I'm lucky enough to have Dave in my life and to have his love is more than enough for this gal "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
make you a deal, dear. i will wait until next week when i get paid and get you as many roses as my paycheck can cover. that ain't likely to be a dozen. do you know how much flowers cost these days? i love you with all my heart, dear, but i'm still poor  -Dave |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Although I really don't know either of you, I do love following the story of you two. You have such a beautiful love, and I love the way you sing it from the rooftops. Happiness to both of you always If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Dave - Money means nothing to me. I love you dear... not your wallet  Tracey - Thank you What a sweet thing to say! I'm glad you liked it. "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
All I can say is knowing love the way you do makes life worthwhile - hopefully it'll last forever for you...lovely write my friend. jwesley |
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