--- If I Were An Annimal --- (My own challenge)

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Open Poetry #17

--- If I Were An Annimal --- (My own challenge)

The Lonely Stranger
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since 1999-06-18

Posts 361
Upstate, NY, USA

0 posted 2001-11-25 09:46 AM

--- If I Were An Annimal ---

If I were an annimal,
What kind would I be?
Perhaps a tall giraffe
With a long neck to see?

Or would I be swift
And run like a horse.
Or a great noble eagle,
Flying his course?

Maybe a tiger,
With beautiful stripes
Who follows his prey
and kills in the night.

No, I think I'm a viper
I run from a fight.
But if you tread on me
I'll certainly bite.

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

1 posted 2001-11-25 11:55 AM

Ha! this is good! This is something a child would enjoy reading I'm sure.. but it's meaning surely is deeper...

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

2 posted 2001-11-25 01:06 PM

This is cool, I like it! Me, personally, I would choose to be a tiger. : )
Nicely done sir

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