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Robert William Gruhn
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since 2001-11-06
Posts 168
California, USA
0 posted 2001-11-24 04:40 PM

Poetry is beauty

Sometimes so sublime

It can have deep meaning

Even in rhyme

Thoughts of a beggar

And those of a king

There's meaning for everyone

Alas for some

Truth doth not ring
© Copyright 2001 Robert William Gruhn - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263
1 posted 2001-11-24 06:26 PM

someone's not been tendin' to the belltower  

Kathleen
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
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Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2001-11-24 07:11 PM

Robert,
I would agree with you poetry is beauty and yours is particularly beautiful. I tyou wanted to adjust the metre slightly you could try adding Even 'when' in rhyme to line four.
Write on
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown
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