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Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2001-11-23 11:39 AM

Does the heart need
to hear a voice
to fall in love thus
Or should the heart
Feel unsaid words
Is this way for us

Can the soul
see a face
In the window of our eyes
Or does the soul
Know when
the written word lies

If you could but see
The me that hides
Here behind the screen
Would you then
Love me more
Than her that
You have seen

If love be found
In this worldly net
Would it be your seine
Or would you
Slip away to find
You’d loved her in vain

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-11-23 11:48 AM

I believe a heart can fall in love without hearing a voice and can read a written lie, oh this is sad and beautiful. A heart knows, beneath it all...it always, always knows!
Beautiful!

Kathleen

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

2 posted 2001-11-23 11:57 AM

I believe you can fall in love without hearing a word, but I also believe that sadly sometimes the heart hears what it wants to hear and sometimes that is lies. Thoughtful write I enjoyed this very much thank you.

Regards,
Olias.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2001-11-23 12:08 PM

If only you could see their eyes...For eyes
tell the truth...beautifully written..

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2001-11-23 02:36 PM

An inspiring, thought provoking write.
One to keep and ponder.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2001-11-23 03:05 PM

Devine One,
And you write so. The answer is sometimes.
*L*

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2001-11-23 05:17 PM

nice

Pell
Member

since 2001-09-16

Posts 134
Pacific NW

7 posted 2001-11-23 05:38 PM

Wowsers, well put.

I love it! (Such is my feeling when a poem touches a resonate chord in my life lol)

btw, OLIAS...
your comment certainly has me thinking from a new perpective too.

Contabo
Member

since 2001-11-21

Posts 159

8 posted 2001-11-23 06:10 PM

Devine....always-always it is what lies beneath that is most important.

If you close your eyes and open your mind you "see" much more.

CM

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2001-11-23 06:13 PM

Good questions, Sharon. I know in my case, I am a tad too easily influenced by beautiful words. But still I think usually the heart knows. And yes, it sure does need to be seen and known and understood and loved. Mine does anyway

Take care.
Sandra

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2001-11-23 07:20 PM

yes. . .

very well done deVine. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

11 posted 2001-11-23 08:03 PM

I like this Poet deVine. This is very good.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

12 posted 2001-11-23 08:17 PM

I truely love poems that are a delight to read due to the composition and talent level and when the give reason to ponder some of life's little questions, then they have that extra kick to them. Well, this one had both of these so I commend you on your talent and on the content you expressed so very well. A wonderful write in many ways.

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

13 posted 2001-11-23 08:21 PM

I thank you all for reading my work. Your understanding and kind words make my heart feel so much better!

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

14 posted 2001-11-25 07:47 AM

I believe that sometimes, when we need..it's because of someone else's lacking. In this poetic case...if he missed the gift inside of you then down the road..he would be needing very badly. Sometimes too late. This is a deep ponderer and proof of all that glows inside.

Sincerely,
Regina

It's all in the mind
Except for what's in the heart.
http://www.mygem.net/heartquill

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

15 posted 2001-11-25 12:25 PM

Nicely done Lady.

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

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