Open Poetry #17 |
Pardon Me |
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Turning now to go I smile at your confusion I do apologize my friend For my unwanted intrusion I thought the signals meant You wanted me to speak Now I see that I misread you Pardon me for being weak The road ahead is clear now I must walk it alone again And though we won’t be lovers I will always call you friend. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Sweet, simple, and to the point. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
amen and amen....well said. Kathleen |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh Sharon, you know I know how this goes. ouch.. Good write. Sandra |
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PoeticLicense Junior Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 30 |
Well written and well said! PL |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
sometimes. . . it's better that way. . . excellent. . . short and flowing. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Sometimes its just difficult to tell isn't it? I love the simplicity in this. Its wonderful. ~I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!~ |
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wornways Member
since 2001-10-18
Posts 204CA, USA |
this path i too walked in times not long preceeding you say you were weak yet i see only your strength expressed by your honest words WARNING: this reader is not prone to terse, canned comments. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Loved this, sometimes it takes more strength to walk away than it does to stay. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yep, it takes more strength to walk away. Great expression, Sharon. |
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