Open Poetry #17 |
(Please)Take My Hand |
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
(please)take my hand, Because tonight, I need love, love that cares, A love that lives, love that gives, So please take my hand, Tonight, Iam alone, sitting here alone, wondering which way my life has a road to walk with, which day will shine my dreams away, So, Tonight, I ask you to take my hand and make my day, Tonight, I need you, Because I used to be afaird of my lonely life, So I need you tonight to hold my hand and take me home, make me feel like a dream come true, (Please) take my hand and comfort me throught the night, make me yours tonight, (please)take my hand, (Please)I ask you to take my hand, Let us walk through this open lonely road, (please) take my hand, tonight.... [This message has been edited by vandana (edited 11-23-2001).] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
lovely! |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I hope that person takes your hand and never lets it go. I enjoyed this Vandana |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Sometimes one needs to hear just this... very nice... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vandana, I'm sure he wont be able to resist this. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I have felt similar feelings many times...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
With words expressing such deep feelings.. No way you will have to wait long...In the meantime....enjoy the comfort of your friends here, who hold your hand in their own by thoughts wished for you. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, Vandana, these feelings are truly universal. Kathleen |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
This was wonderful, how can he not take your hand now. Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I have made similar pleas, without success. I hope yours went better. This is a lovely poem. Sandra |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this read like a song to me.. a bittersweet beauty Vandana "If I could fly ... I'd pick you up ... I'd take you into the night ... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now, this sings and flows with so much love. . . wonderful my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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