Open Poetry #17 |
Trust |
RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Trust doesn't magically appear It's built over a two way street Until you have trust A relationship is not complete If trust is taken advantage of It will take time to recover They may just walk away And leave you to suffer Sometimes the truth may hurt but it will set you free What do you when you hit the point Of using up all your apologies? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) OH MY GOSH, IT'S SO GREAT TO SEE YOU AGAIN, SWEETEST FRIEND, I'VE MISSED YOU SO MUCH!!! (kiss on cheek) Trust and acceptance are the two most important values of love, and I know deep down with all my heart you'll find the true love that will make you feel special and happy always and respected! (smiles) I love you Joanna! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joanna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
I love the wisdom and simple truth in this, well written and much enjoyed, thank you. Regards, Olias. |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
I wanted to quote the part which I liked and comment on it (my usual way), but I just couldn't. This whole poem is just so great! Cross my heart! I too agree that love and trust goes hand in hand, and trust is something that takes a while to build. Only with trust that we know we can count on our mate, that we could depend on him/her to stand by whatever may come... This is really well written. Simple and sweet. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Wise words...well said...and true...it does take time to regain trust. |
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Abigaile Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 112San Mateo, CA |
You are absolutely correct, trust can take a long time to heal. When we truly love someone, no matter how badly they may have broken our trust, we should always find the strength to forgive them. Trust is the cornerstone of all relationships, and love is the foundation for them to be built upon. Without the cornerstone, the building may crumble, but the foundation remains, and when the rubble is cleared away, the foundation may be built on again. *SMILE* "I am nae poet, in a sense; |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Trust is one of the essential ingredients for a relationship...if things are missing we find ourselves doing to much of the work...and doubting the value of the relationship...James |
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~lewisone~ Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 91Virginia |
Beautifully written! Trust is the foundation wall that must be errected before a relationship of love can be fully built... Nice work, simple and very truely spoken. ~lewisone~ |
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