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emily
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 142
USA

0 posted 2001-11-22 09:53 PM

I stretched out in front of the fireplace
in just a slip, nothing more
and as I watched the flames I made a wish.
Just a silly wish, mind you, but mine
nonetheless.
The flames were your tongue, flickering
over me. My arms free by my side waited,
I surrendered, closed my eyes
and imagined you....here...strong,
close and I
waited for you to come…to me, to hold me.
For I am now a potent magical mist
of passion that has not yet been tamed.
How I wish you were here.

Oh, I know it cannot be but all
the dreams I ever wished, all
the magic I denied, lives because
you made me feel
so much a woman.

You made me feel-
so much a woman.

Because you are so much a man.

Emily

Secret Whisper
Member

since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

1 posted 2001-11-22 11:57 PM

Although I do not normally like what could be considered 'love poetry' this is very imaginative and well written. I like the image of the flames being the tongue. Very sensual writing.

Quod me nutrit me destruit.
("What nourishes me also destroys me." - latin)

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-11-23 04:10 AM

Like this...James

Domzi
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since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

3 posted 2001-11-23 05:24 AM

Very sensuous, very imaginative...very visual. I loved reading this poem.

Do or die!

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2001-12-10 08:35 PM

Emily, I went back to find another of your poems, and this was surely worth the look. Wow. You did this with so much yearning and love.
Sandra

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 2001-12-10 08:38 PM

This is beautiful writing, emily. You paint a very nice picture for your thoughts...

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2001-12-10 08:48 PM

(sigh) Oh Emily, this is soooooo passionately beautiful! (sigh) The warm flickers of love shine in your lovely words! (sigh) I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Emily, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

7 posted 2001-12-10 09:02 PM

emily
Such a sensual picture you have painted with your words. Take care......Sue

Suetang

Hypnosis
Member

since 2001-12-02

Posts 325
CO

8 posted 2001-12-10 09:28 PM

Very imaginative, Emily! I could see what was happening. I like I like

Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

9 posted 2001-12-10 09:32 PM

OOOOOO those dream lovers do it to you every time. They have such a sensual way of making you feel like a woman. BRAVO!!! I love sensual writing like this and the dream that you wove. I love it.

**hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

emily
Member

since 2000-10-03

Posts 142
USA

10 posted 2001-12-10 11:33 PM

you people are so very kind

thank you for pulling this up and you picked a wonderful evening to do it,
I am feeling quite sensuous

I appreciate your replies so very much.

Emily

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