Open Poetry #17 |
Poets Make Things Happen |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Poets Make Things Happen we birth we feed we live and die sharing stories needing giving caring on the wind words are colorless fine words are never-ending I am, therefore, you, and you, and you while still me I, as you, am either young or old perhaps in-between I, as you, am mother father sister brother a link to yesterday a hope for tomorrow I, as you, grow cold or warm experience pain or joy love, and laugh it matters not my creed or religion I am, as you are a poet we can change the world one word at a time it all begins in our heart mine pumps red as yours does circle me with your words circle the globe with your words make it happen now and we will read you. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
There was deep motivation here. Excellently expressed, and joyously shared. We can change the world ... one word at a time!! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*WOW* Karilea, what an expression of words and to reach out for the world through poets words. Thank you dear fabulous POET. ~*Theresia~* |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I love it and you surely made that happen Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wonderful sentiments here. I agree. Sandra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karilea....we do change the world, do we not? Our messages ring with truth and deep feelings. Words from pens which are like steel etching the most hard rocks for all time. Thank you...I enjoyed this.. |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Amen Sunshine....Amen. Regards, Olias. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Couldnt have said it better myself! And a fine poet you are! RP |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karilea I really love this, as it is so honest and true! Enjoy the holidays...hugs, Nancy. ~Life may not be the song you requested, |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
undoubtedly one of your best....you said all the right things in all the right ways...Bravo! |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"circle the globe with your words" Wonderfully composed Karilea ... you've woven these sentiments beautifully, much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Karilea- Yes...so true, my friend. Really enjoyed this one...love what you said, and love how you said it. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the power of the written word. . . you know it very well my friend. . . excellent. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
oh gosh how true it is and you have said it with an outpouring of your heart that brought tears to my eyes. We are all things things and each other as we absorb the beauty of the written word. BRAVO!!!**hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
And my favorite word, the one to encircle the globe, would be LOVE. Your words always encircle my heart and mind, and make me thankful for the art and truth of poetry. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
a link to yesterday a hope for tomorrow Sunshine you expressed it soooooooo beautifully... *~coco~* |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea-- You speak for so many...one word at a time..thank you for this uplifting poem!! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this got me teary eyed and I have no idea why other than I really like it |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Yes the write has a thousand eyes. Enoyed |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Beautiful. |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
A spectrum of lives bonding tightly through poetic words! A beautiful thought, you've captured so eleqently. Thank you. Rae |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Excellent expression Karilea. We are...poets. Loved this and into the keepers it goes... On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
You do have a way of bringing your light into a day...thanks! |
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