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Love cannot lie
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Love cannot lie |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
The sun shadowed a ray on your shoulder as you walked away from my shore Drifting to another with one to many drinks on a night far away from me The ray a flame of desire confusing your senses tempting your spirit fooling your love and avoiding the soul Falling into her arms in a whirldwind of passion struggling to keep afloat drowning in her Calmly returning back to me Hidding your eyes avoiding my hands Thinking that it went undetected not knowing that love cannot lie |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Ouch. This one hurts, walker. It stings of the truth and harshness of reality. You can never fool one who loves you. Small things like avoiding a touch are magnified a thousandfold when betrayal is the cause. Great write. All writing comes |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
love tells all--even if in whispers... enjoyed.. hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Perfection in print...what else can I say! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
walker - a'hhhhh, I like what you write, romance, love, and love that cannot lie... BC |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
the hiding of the eyes is always a clear sign..from either side of the fence. You scored a bullseye with this one, walker...  |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Walker, this touches deep in2 many a heart PoetFriend and thank you for sharing this touching poem with all of us2nite... *~coco~* |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Love surely won't show you any lies. This poem is so true...and I loved reading it. Do or die! |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Hiding his eyes, and avoiding your touch... The first is a tell-tale sign, and the second is it's painful evidence. A loved one who shuns from you when you reach out to touch him... that is the worst, i think. You would feel like a knife was taken to your heart.  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Walker...this is a powerful write of a hurt that goes deep... |
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