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Get Lost ( You Make Me Want To )
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Get Lost ( You Make Me Want To ) |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Puzzle pieces scattered fit as one with seamless meld Notions torn and tattered by a moon-light breeze dispelled Eyes once dis-believing now accept the facts they see Earth if you're recieving tell me how lost can I be Here among the planets whirring 'round familiar star Beliefs carved in granite dissipate then here we are Drifting through the universe un-tethered from the past Fueled by pure emotion burst from physics laws at last All things deemed immutable refuted by the heart Why has this eluded us so long let's make our start Here, right now this instant, lest we let escape this chance To dance one dance eternal, lover, which they call romance [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 11-22-2001).] |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Yes love does make the world go round, I like the style and rhyme of this, and its going into my library, right now. Thanks for sharing. Regards, Olias. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dear Dr. I enjoyed the write, you enjoy the day. Have a happy. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Olias, If I was a single man, I might try to use this as a pick-up line, at least it would be original. Thanks for the reply, I'm honored you'd include it in your library . Doc Sy, Thanks, and to you too sir. To chronicle the flow, each in our own way, such is how we define ourselves. Doc [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 11-22-2001).] |
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