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Paradise Lost
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Paradise Lost |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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Paradise Lost As my eyes should see the break of morning light the sign of warmth and a new start, when your smile would shine through the darkened night, these things put a skip in my heart. The thought of never seeing another dawn no more life, no you to breath, this makes my eyes mist with tears that will soon be gone by morning, no pleasure to grieve. If I was to survive such a holocaust no more warmth, nothing else to start, your smile to me would be paradise lost ... the final beating of my heart. |
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Pell Member
since 2001-09-16
Posts 134Pacific NW |
Simply beautiful, ctowen... My heart swells with pleasure, and then skips a beat, as I read this. Thank you for sharing it  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Absolutely lovely write, Craig. All writing comes |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
your smile to me would be paradise lost ... the final beating of my heart. ------------------------ Such breathtaking lines..... This is so wonderful......and so well expressed and touching. Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Well written, from the heart, and very true. Regards, Olias. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is this loss that we sometimes must face, and we do go on... life is never the same, but then, change cannot occur and have life remain the same, regardless... a good write, Sir... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is good writing...James |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Perfectly written. I'm lovin this Craig! |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Thank you one and all. Your comments help me both see and feel more than I can express. Again thank you. |
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