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Excuse your Muse?
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Excuse your Muse? |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597
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Excuse your muse? But I refuse! And call you crazy? Well, okay, maybe. But not because I give no pause To those who wink At poetry-think. It's just that I Don't wonder why I write like this From my abyss. We're each I'm sure, eh? A nut de jure All happy clams Midst rhymes enjamb's. (Thanks, Sunshine  ) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
but if YOU were to write like Seuss I'd have to excuse your silly goose for feathers would get in way of rhyme I find they tickle all the time for 'tis the season of true turkey not a goose or seasoned jerky so pleasure is all mine you see that you took some fun with poetry |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* oh I like this one a lot. Your muse is wonderful and has given me a smile. Very well done.   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Ah...the elusive muse...mine too, likes to play games! Back to the top, e! We need to see your name there again! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Oh I'm so glad Serenity bumped this back up, or I would have missed it. This is very cute indeed. I like your muse, it needs no excuse at all. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
There's no excuse! Don't miss this muse! For fun and pun, the Krawdad's run. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
We're each I'm sure, eh? A nut de jure All happy clams Midst rhymes enjamb's. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Love this...sure do! Hugs, Nancy. *~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~* |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
This is wonderful! Loved it. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Well, I seem to have forgotten about this one. Thank you all for replying. Glad you enjoyed. This was fun to do. Karilea, Thanks again and for your verse. k, Thanks, I owe ya one. Yes, my muse has gone south for the winter, maybe you've seen her. Well, not for the whole winter, I hope. Or maybe she's just off pouting somewhere. Ya never know, ya just never know. Kacy, Thanks for your verse. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
heehee...enjoyed these little silly ditties...  hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Krawdad-- I'm a nut, for sure with a touch of allure Enjoyed this! thanks |
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LadyShadowWalker Junior Member
since 2001-12-27
Posts 15Minnesota, USA |
Dr. Seuss took a vacation and you took his place, huh? I'm not saying it's bad. I think it's wonderful. It's more of a intellectual combination of words and meanings. It's cool. :-) Keep up the good work! --Lady "I believe you can't appreciate real love until you've been burn, |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I think I saw your muse go by not really of course I told a lie for she is right there with you and bright she shines over you two Giggles Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
a muse, is a muse... I believe she comes to your heart soon to leave but if you will play she'll much longer stay and then you never will grieve. Excellent write Krawdad I like this a lot and I like you piccy which I've not seen before. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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C? Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 190 |
woah! what a wicked rhyme pattern! short and sweet lines, thats the way ta do it! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Cool stuff! Sandra |
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