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Sometimes tears are cried....inside...
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Sometimes tears are cried....inside... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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As he held her tightly she fought back the flow of tears and she bit her lower lip when he said "I love you dear." With every touch of his hand she wanted to pull away the question to be answered where had he been all day? After a few days passed by he asked "What was wrong with she?" and when she finally spoke she said "Did not my tears you see?" He said "I never saw your tears, I didn't know that you had cried." Slowly a tear rolled down her face "Sometimes tears are cried... inside." 11-22-01 On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
This is a GREAT ONE, a good keeper to the Library Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ Ooooooohhhh, how poignantly written~ *Hugs* to you sweet lady~  ~*Marge*~  ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What person hasn't held it all in at one time or another... thank you for this... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanking you all...  On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Abigaile Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 112San Mateo, CA |
I really loved this. Sometimes it is difficult for us to tell our loved ones why we are hurting, but tolerance and understanding can overcome any amount of pain. I really enjoyed the write. *SMILE* "I am nae poet, in a sense; |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
GS, my gosh well this poem got me 2have tears in my eyes... A touching write PoetFriend and I thank you4sharing this poem with us... *~coco~* |
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Carol Lina Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 94USA |
sure are, darlin' sure are....take a sip of something comforting and dry those eyes...however we can from the inside., I know this feeling well. Carolina |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
He said "I never saw your tears, I didn't know that you had cried." Slowly a tear rolled down her face "Sometimes tears are cried... inside." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oh Donna!! This is wonderful, but,it made me cry on the outside. Thanks for the keeper. Hugs to you and a Happy Thanksgiving Nancy ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh my gosh did this one ever touch my heart. It is so very true....many times tears are cried inside. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Gentle Spirit, I know of these tears on the inside too. Take heart. Love, Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Gentle Spirit ... this was so tender and beautifully composed. What a lovely phrase you've ended this piece with ... so very true. This is a gentle reminder to look beyond and see within. Much enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
loved the way you have put thoughts to words... Regards, sudhir [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 11-22-2001).] |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Dear Somy~ smile...it's a beautiful day..you have beautiful ways, inside and out. And no one makes my ~somy cry, without a dot in the eye!!!  If I could I would. There is great pain when the inside rains. I'm here. Love and Hugs!Sincerely, Regina |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
There is so much truth to this. Sometimes the tears cannot be seen, but you'd think that if they truly knew you they would surely see them. So sad! All writing comes |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Gentle Spirit - so gentle you write of the tears hidden inside. Yes, they do hide there at times, but I wonder why they do not look, and see them... BC |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
That they are indeed and it takes a conscious effort to remove the blinders and see with the heart to actually notice them sometimes. Beautifully expressed and the flow is wonderful. Very much enjoyed as always. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
How true, sometimes we cry on the inside, and can't understand how the other person can't see those tears. You've written it very well here. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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