Open Poetry #17 |
Words Are My Bond |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Words Are My Bond How special you are I became extra fond With words thus far In forming our bond Tantalising tastefully With words we say In capturing desires Our words foreplay Pursuing of passions Words I’m keeping Reaching my nights There when sleeping The seductive drops In tasting each kiss Words we drink in Absorbed into bliss Each word spreads From a tongue slips Delightful pleasures In covering my lips Those “if only notes Our feelings convey To ream of raptures Captivating foreplay Hope©2001 |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Hope, "The seductive drops In tasting each kiss Words we drink in Absorbed into bliss.." I like that stanza Softly sensual and well worded. This is a nice way to start my morning Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Soooooooo beautifully romantic and softly sensual! (smiles) May these sweet words forever hold sweet meaning! I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggssssss) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
HopeS, An interesting read, enjoyed. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks Tara , I am so pleased you enjoyed Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks dear sweet Noah for sharing so much yes words do touch I thank you Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Pleased you enjoyed Seymour your reply is so much appreciated Hope |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
You are always able to make your words so sensually beautiful. This poem is no different. It flows with sensual love. BRAVO!!!! I love it. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hope~ This is really quite adorably done~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I loved the finale |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
very sensual but in a nice subtle way Kathleen |
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