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So Delicate....The Human Creature
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So Delicate....The Human Creature |
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Robert William Gruhn Member
since 2001-11-06
Posts 168California, USA |
Note: This was the second poem I'd ever written, back in 1998, to date, I've written over 2,500 pieces. So delicate....the human creature A mind so fragile as a feature Ever so brave Ever so afraid Wanting not Yet needing a lot Suffering in pain Then better again You shed a tear There is no cure Oh child do not fear Though death draws near Enter the soul so light Rendering no earthly plight Calendars and clocks disappear Eternally happiness finally here Sadness and darkness do not exist Satan is robbed of his evil twist The Lord awaits before Heaven's gates He loves you no matter what your traits His spirit so perfectly pure Great mystery of life Now Completely clear |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
indeed!!!!! yes! so delicate the life, the creature, the beauty, the human heart! so kindness must be spoken from the depths of us, no taking part in negativity! your verse is beauty on the wings of free! i love it! it's a part of me! (thank you for this... i know you say you wrote this a while back but beautiful poetry lasts forever! and this is such a piece!! wonderful!!) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent writing...James |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Yes true indeed, we are delicate human creatures. Call me crazy but I always wondered why animals don't cry but humans do? Animals cant talk to express their sadness so they should be able to cry. : ) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
well keep writing! This is lovely. Kathleen |
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