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Whisper
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Whisper |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Whisper Yes hear it so gentle small caress touches my soul makes my heart sing fills my night with dreams gives flight to all my fantasies sets passion's heat flowing starts my heart beating lips parted, sighing sweetly spoken softest touch Whisper I Love You Karen Torbiak© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
The small gentle things mean so much.A lovely write. Peaches |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Shall I whisper, written with style and much intensity.. or shall I just SHOUT !!! either way I enjoyed this. Regards, Olias. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Well done Karen! First the tear shaped one yesterday and now this! You're on a roll girl!! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Those soft touches and sweet whispers will get you every time!  Nice work, Karen. All writing comes |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
such wonderful words to say and hear, this is lovely Karen..... Greeneyes~ [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-20-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
StarTime~ You KNOW I'm loving this one ... The perfect companion poem to my 'Bring Me Down Easy' ... Just toooooooo cool~ Thank you for soaring with me~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is a beautiful whisper. And what better way to say the words "I love you", than in a gentle whisper like this. Love the format too If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You have such a romantic soul, Karen, much enjoyed. Sandra |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderfully done my friend. . . soft and quiet. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And in the still of the night as a cloud passes over the moon A gentle breeze whispers softly of love felt strong and pure. Beautifully done Star...You do this so well. Enjoyed... |
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