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The Rain
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The Rain |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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The Rain As the sun bares the heat of the day the wind shifts and clouds head this way Slowly at first without a sign like problems with answers hard to find The clouds gather from distant skies shaping "How's" and forming "Why's" They linger but not for long just enough to show what went wrong And just as quick the rain begins the drizzle, the downpour and then it ends But before the sun bares the heat of the day the wind shifts and the clouds roll away |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Hi Ctowen, This reminded me when I was a little girl and I used to lay in the grass and watch the clouds. Clouds form into some cool shapes if you look closely. Beautiful write. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ctowen, Enjoyed the read. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
the storms of life, all the down pours and clouds, and then one day we awake and see the blue skies....nicely done always~ Lauren~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I enjoyed reading this one. Excellent imagery of clouds, rain, troubles and questions all floating around in a threatening way...and then blowing away. |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Anything rain themed, I'm a sucker for. I loved this.  I am many. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I appreciate rain, especially after a long time without it. Oops I already replied to your poem! Oh well it's ok, It just means this poem was x-tra special!  |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Now why do I get such a feeling of hope from this poem? Very well done, Craig. I love it. **hugs**   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
The raindrops falling Steady rhythm coming down Mother nature’s tears Sometimes I love the rain.. listening to it tap against the window. It always relaxes me. Nice write Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wiping raindrops off my face. Sandra |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I liked this, but I prefer the rain to staaaaaaaaaaay  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Angels tears cascade From iridescent pupils Glittering with love (sigh) Oh Craig, this is soooooooo lovely! (smiles) I love the rain; I love walking out in it when it's drizzling and smelling the juniper and jasmine scents as it relaxes me! Your words always hum such beautiful music to our ears! (smiles) We all love you so very much, sweet friend! (big hugggggssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
I really enjoyed this.I loved to hear the rain when I`m going to sleep.  Juanita |
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