Open Poetry #17 |
Bring Me Down Easy |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bring Me Down Easy ~*Marge Tindal*~ Here I am soaring in heartfelt flight not wanting my heart to touch ground Far above the clouds of reality Oh, please if I must touch down bring me down easy in your arms forever tethered by your charm Winds of change may buffet me about but, a safe landing is you of that, I've no doubt~ So bring me down easy, that I might lay in your arms forever ... and one more day~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This is so sweetly beautiful, Marge. Your love poems are charming. God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Lowered into arms , tethered by charms , yes beautifully expressed Marge Hope |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Ok my arms are open land away. Kisses and hugs. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
a big sigh for this lovely piece...and a hug for the poet! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Marge, you deserve this {{{{{HUGS}}}}} and many regards , sudhir |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I sense you may always smile? but this looks great on you....hugs Marge~ Lauren |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Marge, you have just put my thoughts into words. I only wish I could have written them this well. This is a lovely poem, such charm and enchantment in it If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a nice way to come back down to the 'real' world. But can I just hang out on that kite for a little while longer? Please? |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I'll bring you down easy, dear Margie. Please know My touch will be gentle and won't let you go. You will not be injured for I will not fail. I just need to get my strong hands on your tail So we can go soaring once more with delight.. For I've never had such a wonderful kite!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ Thank you soooooo much~ Hope~ Love sharing these feelings with you~ Seymour~ Well ... just alrighty then ! ! Martie~ Thank you for both the *sighs* and the *hug*~ Sudhir~ Awwwwww, I appreciate you~ GreenEyes~ I am wearing a big smile for sure. Thanks, lady~ Tracey~ Well ... I certainly thank you for the reply~ MidniteSun~ Just love being reeled in gently~ Thanks for the thoughts~ Balladeer~ Your thoughts always make me soar~ You're preciously special~ Love you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Easy it will be Marge...not too much to ask...James |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I saw this title yesterday, wanted to read but real life...lol...called me away. You have written my heart. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh Marge, this is a precious write... I truly adored the expression you've penned here it's absolutely beautiful and I shall place this poem in2my PoetryChest4many more reads sweetie... Hugs2uMyFriend *~Coco~* |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Don't we all wish to land that way!! It's past my bed time and I need to get myself to sleep now....this is a nice way to go. Thank you Marge for your dreamy thoughts. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
bring me down easy in your arms forever tethered by your charm ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ more poetic grace... love it! Hugs, Deb |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JamesMichael~ The perfect reply ... thank you~ Duncan~ Just knowing you came back to read and reply, gives me a smile~ Thank you~ CoCoBaci~ Awwww, thank you sweetie~ BluesSerenade~ Thank you for letting me know you found it so gently comforting~ BloomingRose~ LOVE that word 'grace' ... thank you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is lovely... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
the smile is lovely on you Marge. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, Marge, this is fabulous! Wonderfully expressed! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Marge....I envy how you say your words of love so well...I feel as if I am there. They are always beautiful....thanx... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely Marge....just so gentle and...yes, lovely. Have a blessed Thanksgiving my friend. Hugs, Nancy. ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ You are sweet to think so. GentleSpirit~ Thank you dear lady~ Denise~ Always my thanks to you, dear friend~ Magnus~ Awww .. just my little heart-ink quilling again~ Thank you~ Enchantress~ *Hugs* to you sweet gal~ *Hugs* to all~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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