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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Tonight finding myself outside searching a starless sky for just one to make a wish upon in desire of you tonight, thinking this love is a childish dream this innocence belongs to one less broken this renewal of emotion unwise wondered at my sanity tonight, not rational wished upon a starless sky trusted fate and all such foolishness wondered at my prior hesitation tonight you are the first the last the always dream of you I never want to wake up from tonight |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
tonight...its cold!!! tonight I relate to your poem o yuh nice |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What a beautiful way to start the day…morning coffee with your words, your dreams…need I say I love this piece? Though I fear it kept you up much too late…so now, as you sleep…dream..wish..believe in fate. A wish upon a starless sky Just trust in fate, don’t ask it why Dreams like this they can come true The stars shine bright for me and you We can forever live this dream That once we thought just make-believe Just close your eyes and make a wish Of dreams so sweet of love like this Yes, wishes really can come true Put faith in dreams, I’ll dream with you If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Duncan, What a sweet piece  I can relate to this as well. I can't tell you how many times I've wished on a star for the one I love. Sometimes they come true I've found mine.Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done sir...romantic, filled with yearning and self examination... a pleasure to read you again. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
~tonight you are the first the last the always dream of you I never want to wake up from tonight~ love and enjoy this wonderful piece!! Charisma ~TMP~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan, I wish you luck tonight. |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
Oh that you would Have searched the sky this Saturday last. My sky was ablaze With stars to wish upon As they went flying past. I wished for love for Lonely hearts as I watched The last one fall. Take heart my friend For if you pine, my Wish was for us all. No one ever listened themselves into trouble. |
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Carol Lina Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 94USA |
This is a dream that is never foolish. It's heartfelt...very real words. Carolina |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I hope your wish comes true just because the desire in your heart is so wonderful. I lost myself in the feel of this poem, Duncan. Absolutely wonderful. I think this one needs to go in my library so that I can read it again before I go to bed. It makes wishing in dreams all the more pleasing. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Dreams and wishes sometimes come true seems to me maybe these will for you and your special you know who |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
tonight, thinking this love is a childish dream Beautiful expression... *~coco~* |
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Apachecat906 Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 217Michigan, USA |
"Star Light, Star Bright" This was always one of my favorites from when I was four years old. Thank you for sharing your wish, it brought memories of yesterday and more wishes for tomarrow. I hope yours comes true. Go ahead, push your luck; find out how much love the world can hold |
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Abigaile Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 112San Mateo, CA |
This is so beautiful and so moving. I love it. *SMILE* The one you wish for will someday feel you love, and you will feel it, too. I truly belive that real love has a way of making its way into everyone's lives. "I am nae poet, in a sense; |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Thank you for your kind reply to my poem about my Aunt, your poetry is very comforting to me for some reason. I hope you continue writing more. It touches a place, can't explain it. Poetry is like that sometimes isn't it? Just...Kathleen |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
tonight you are the first the last the always dream of you I never want to wake up from tonight ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Duncan this is extemely beautiful and very touching. Enjoyed as always. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
*soft sigh* sooo romantic... ~Tier |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Sometimes we have to seize the moment, and not question love. Great poem. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
This is excellent. Peaches |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
May your wishes come true, Duncan. Great honest write. All writing comes |
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