Walking Rain Drenched Streets

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Open Poetry #17

Walking Rain Drenched Streets

Robert William Gruhn
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since 2001-11-06

Posts 168
California, USA

0 posted 2001-11-20 02:09 AM

Walking rain drenched streets
Oil and grease aroma
Scenting cold night air
Hop scotch puddles waiting

Black tar country heaven
Farm boy's happy trails
Winding to his future
Just one leading home

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2001-11-20 08:55 AM

Excellent - There's but one path to take..

wornways
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 204
CA, USA

2 posted 2001-11-20 09:22 AM

so easy to just form my own understanding of what this means to the poem. love vauge little ditties as such that can be interpretted any number of ways. there are a few very popular books written like that. best sellers for several centuries even. there's a lot to be said for ambiguity.

there's something about your poems i like in general. but, as i only tend to read poems with a max of 2 comments, i don't see all your ditties. this is just my screening process so i'm not here all day reading people's stuff. i'll go mad anyway trying to understand it all. if you care to, i'd like to learn your inspiration behind this piece.

WARNING: this reader is not prone to terse, canned comments.

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